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How can schools and universities help to ensure that students do not suffer from stress during the exam period?

#schools #universities #students #stress #exam #period
Due to pressure
of
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on
 schools or
universities
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university
university's
exams students
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exams, students
 suffer from burnout.
This
 may lead to physical and mental disabilities ahead. What should schools and
universities possibly
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universities, possibly
 do to take the
weigh
weight down with a load
weight
off
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of
 their learners' shoulders and have no reservations about their
physical and body
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physical body and
 health? One method to sustain them is organizing an emotional back up. By doing so teachers let their students know that they are welcome to share their concerns and
uncertinities
being unsettled or in doubt or dependent on chance
uncertainties
, their fears and possible results.
For instance
, knowing about
unsuccessful exam expereince
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the unsuccessful exam experience
unsuccessful exam experience
an unsuccessful exam experience
unsuccessful exam experiences
 of their life models will diminish
students' inclination
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the students' inclination
 towards equanimity, serenity and restraint. Another approach that sounds quite plausible is for learners to organise their schedule in a
way
 to equally maintain work-life balance. Indulging in your leisure activities not only allows us to unwind after a tough spell of
studying but
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studying, but
 gives us the
way
 to recharge our batteries and face the task ahead.
Thus it
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Thus, it
 is the most accessible
way
 for anyone and free of charge. All in all, even though the
last
 method may seem as an
upproachable
capable of being read with comprehension
approachable
appreciable
 one,
undoubtadly
without doubt; certainly
undoubtedly
, if
executed will
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executed, will
 it will pay off in the long run. I strongly believe that in order to cope with stress, finding an ingenious
way
 of self-caring will balance students' academic and personal lives.

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