The range of technology available to people is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Others think it has an opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Technology
is growing
day
by
day
and it's easily available around the globe which is raising bars between
wealthy
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wealth
and poverty-
striken
grievously affected especially by disease
stricken
.
This
essay argues
this
statement because
technology
helps
underpriviliged
lacking the rights and advantages of other members of society
underprivileged
people to grow and raise
there
of them or themselves
their
standard of living. Poor people are not much aware about
technology
due to which they are not able to work on many things and now-a-days everything is evolving on the basis of
technology
and
this
causes
rise
Suggestion
a rise
in
gap
Suggestion
the gap
between rich and poor people. Now-a-days
technology
is changing
day
by
day
and through which people can show
there
of them or themselves
their
hidden talent and enhance it
also
by learning it. Many free resources are available on
internet to learn in
Suggestion
the internet to learn
the internet to learn in
different ways and languages which help people to learn and they can earn good money and raise
there
of them or themselves
their
living standard.
For example
- Sudharam belongs to a poor family and he to build a cycle which uses water as fuel
instead
of any oil and he grabbed knowledge regarding
this
on
internet
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the internet
and showcased it on
youtube
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YouTube
through which he got a call from a big
Japenese
of or relating to or characteristic of Japan or its people or their culture or language
Japanese
MNC. By and large
,
Accept space
,
I strongly believe that
technology
is playing
vital role
Suggestion
a vital role
in reducing poverty and helping people to enhance
there
of them or themselves
their
social and intellectual skills.
Technology
is responsible for increasing living standard and
growing financially
Accept comma addition
growing, financially
of people.

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