Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extend do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantage?

As industrial revolution and technology increase, the machines and robots became real and those have been dominating many p

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parts

of our life.

This

change has several benefits but

also

, there are some serious disadvantages. The

first

of disadvantage is that mankind's jobs are losing by robots. Most of companies and factories use more machines than hire people; those can work the whole day and more cheaper than a person. Because of

this

problem, finding job will be more difficult.

Second

, due to increasing the rate of losing jobs,

also

average earning money per each person will decrease. Everyone's lives will be harder than a high-tech century.

Lastly

, the rate of birth is going to decrease; people do not need to earn money and go outside.

Also

, it can cause d

ecreasing

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decreased

the chance to meet each other, so, after 5 decades, maybe the number of mankind will be half than now.

On the other hand

, the

first

benefit is that companies/factories can reduce their money because using them is cheaper, so they will concentrate to make a higher quality and low price things from the factory.

Secondly

, in agriculture, the farmers can use them; they can cultivate a lot of crops than before,

as a result

of it, the cost of crops will decrease.

Then

, we can buy crops m

ore cheap

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cheaper

price.

Lastly

, our activities during leisure time will improve

such

as games, movies, dramas... . We can enjoy our break time more relax even babies, elder citizens and females. In conclusion, the i

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industrial

revolution is making our life better,

however

, there are

also

dangers. In my view, after 50 y

ears most

Accept comma addition

years, most

of career will be destroyed by them, so, please be careful to use them and d

evelope

make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation

develop

the level of life.