Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

Over recent decades, going abroad for education has become a significant issue of people's life both students and societies. Some say that the experience of moving overseas is completely worth because of bringing
benefits
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benefits, however
however
others say that there are more negative aspects than positive ones. In
this
essay, I will examine both sides of
this
trend and provide my overall opinion. From an overall perspective, there are several advantages to moving abroad to study. The main advantage of
this
is that living in a new country provides key opportunities for students' future career pathway.
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that, students are able to create a new
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wider
social and business network from different countries,
various professional field
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the various professional fields
various professional fields
and numerous disciplines.
As a result
, they might learn to on their own feet, to survive, to find a job in a new habitat.
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importance of sponsor
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people who cannot afford it
can not
can not
cannot
be denied. Despite these arguments, there are
also
many disadvantages. One of the most obvious of these is that students may have to deal with racism where they live. If a student comes from different places where various languages are spoken or different religions are believed, they struggle with these sort of conditions
besides
they are lonely for their hometowns and families. They have lived far away from homeland and they don't have a chance to see them whenever they want.
Furthermore
, brain drain makes the country affect poorly as financial and cultural. International students may forget their history, background and traditions.
This
because they are assimilated and metamorphose. For
this
reason, the problem caused by culture shock should not be underestimated. In conclusion,
this
is a topic which raises some significant questions in contemporary life. Weighing up all of the facts, it would seem that salient benefits outweigh
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the downsides
.
studying
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Studying
abroad is an issue which is sure to continue demanding our attention for the foreseeable future.

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