Some people believe the Internet is the most important invention in modern history. Do you agree or disagree?

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Various inventions have shaped the
world
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in a way we see it as of today.
However
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,
invention
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the invention
of the Internet is given the utmost importance due to its effect on today’s
world
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.
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, it has divided the society
in
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into
two parts because certain people believe that
Internet
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the Internet
deserves the importance over the other inventions whereas, other people feel quite the opposite of it. In my opinion, I completely agree with the fact that the internet is the most significant finding till date. There are a number of reasons why people consider the Internet as
blessing
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a blessing
.
Firstly
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, it has brought the
world
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closer and people are able to communicate with each other instantly.
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, now it only takes
couples
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a couple
couple
of seconds to send or receive a message to someone in the other
country whereas,
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country, whereas
earlier it will take
couple
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a couple
of months if sent via letter. In my opinion, all communication will come at a halt if the Internet is
shutdown
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shut down
and the
world
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would be affected adversely. Apart from faster communication, the Internet is able to provide a platform where, bundles of data could be stored and easily accessed by anyone around the
world
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.
As a result
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, people
are are
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
able to know about the various events happening around the
world
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which was not possible before.
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, with the help of those bundles of data many scientists were able to gather data that led to great scientific discoveries.
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, when Africa was hit with Ebola in 2016, doctors and scientists in America were able to gather the
data
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data, such
such
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as its effect and cause available on the Internet resulting in the finding the cure to completely eradicate the disease. The Internet has led to effective communication and has brought the
world
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closer in a way in which one had never imagined.
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World
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The world
has witnessed various substitutes of
inventions but
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inventions, but
never has and never will witness the substitute of the Internet.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unparalleled
  • revolutionized
  • democratized
  • vast databases
  • tremendous
  • constraints
  • virtually eliminated
  • real-time
  • transformed
  • advancements
  • challenges
  • privacy issues
  • cybercrimes
  • dependence
  • significant
  • equally transformative
  • paved the way
  • profound
  • consume
  • social movements
  • public opinion
  • political landscapes
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