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Some people think that men are naturally more competitive then women. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

#people #men #women
Nowadays competitive
nature
is help to people
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is helping people
is helping to people
 to get a success in
life
. Some school of thoughts
consider
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considers
 that the men are naturally more competitive
then
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than
 women
.
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.
I will discuss both views in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
.
First
 of all
,
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,
everyone
have
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has
competitive
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a competitive nature
nature
 because everyone wants to get success with the help of competition. Nowadays, all people do competition in their
life
. Men and women
Thay
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They
That
 both have
competitive
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a competitive nature
nature
.
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.
Women are more competitive because women
are vary
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vary
 punctual in
life
rether
on the contrary
rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
men thay
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men, they
men they
men that
 are more polite by
nature they
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nature, they
 do
work
 with politeness or with very good way
.
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.
Women can manage many works in one day like they do the household
work
 as well as do jobs. Probing
further
, women are
mentaly
in your mind
mentally
 strong and women have more ability
rether
on the contrary
rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 men to manage any
work
alone but
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alone, but
 men are dependent on women like for food
,
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,
 for
clothes for
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clothes, for
 caring their family and
any where
at or in or to any place
anywhere
 but women can survive alone in their
life
.
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.
Women stand with men to joint shoulder because women do more
work
 or earn much money
rether
on the contrary
rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 men. On
other hand
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the other hand
, men have
also
 so much
responsibilities
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responsibility
 of their
work
, family. Men have much money to fulfil their family's needs, give them
happiness but
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happiness, but
 women have
responsibility
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the responsibility
 of their family or their household works. Men do a lot of
work
 for their family not for their self. To sum up, men and women they both have need for each other in
life
.As women are equal to men.
Although
 in many ways which requires
physically
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physical
stronth
the property of being physically or mentally strong
strength
 or power to
attempt but
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attempt, but
ladies
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the ladies
also
 hold the right to be treated as men.

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