Some people think that parents should teach children. how to be member of society. others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both view and give your opinion.

At
present
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the present time
time
,
society
is
most important
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more important
for everyone.
but
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But
many people believe parents how to teach their children for good member in
society
,
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,
while others believe
teacher
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the teacher
is the most
responsable
worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable
responsible
for learning
this
. In
this
essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
discusses
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discuss
both these views and include my opinion. Taking into account views of the former, parents have to teach easily their
student
rather than
school
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a school teacher
school teachers
teacher
because
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Because
parents
are understand
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understand
their
student
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students
and
also
they know how to teach children and
also
plants are living children
from
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since
they were born.
for
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For
example, Virat Kohli which is
good
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a good person
person
and he is
also
help
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helping
to underprivileged
student
. I watch one movie about Virat Kohli and in
this
movie Virat Kohli learned their parents how to be
good
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a good person
good people
person
in
society
. Now
,
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,
Considering the views of the latter,
nowatime
education
is
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are
the most
vapon
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weapons
weapon
vain
for good
person
in
society
.
teachers
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Teachers
have provide
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have provided
a good education to children in order to
becoming
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become
a good
person
and we read many
time
teacher
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teachers
are
most powerful
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more powerful
role in
student
to every situation.
In the
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Children in the school
school
children
are learn
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are learning
have learnt
have learned
many things like respect, discipline, helping to poor
person
.
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.
student
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The student
Student
A student
is learning
many
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much
more with
teacher
rather than parents because in the
school
,
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,
strict rules
was made
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were made
by
teacher
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the teacher
teachers
a teacher
.
student
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The student
Student
A student
must follow
this rules
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these rules
this rule
. Many
school
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schools
have taken
lecture which
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lecture, which
is
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has also helped
also helps
also
help for our
society
. For instant, SDIS
School which
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School, which
is located in Gandhinagar.
This
school
is taking
lecture
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the lecture
.
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.
which
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Which
name is
society education
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society, education
and
also
they organize one program for
encourage
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encouraging a student
encouraging student
student
. In my opinion,
school
is the most responsible because in present
time
both parents are doing job so they
are are
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
not giving
time
to their children but parents spend lots of money in
school
for their children. To sum up,
good name
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a good name
is making very much needed in the
society
and many people are
success
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successful
in social life.
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