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There are many different types of music in the world today.why do we need music?Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International Music that ie heard every where nowadays?

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There
are
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is
 varieties or
music
 in today's world.
why
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Why
 is
music
 necessary?Between the conventional
music
 of a country and foreign
music
,
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which is more crucial?
This
 essay will discuss if
music
 is necessary and if conventional
music
 is more pertinent than Cosmopolitan
music
.In my opinion, I think the former. On the one hand
,
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,
music
 is sometimes called the meaning of life because it can help to reach the darkest corner in our hearts and even brighten it.
for
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For
 example
,
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,
a cousin of mine always listens to
music
 at the close from work
everyday
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every day
.
his
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His
 reasons was that
music
 help him relieves the stress from the outside world.
On the other hand
,
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,
music
 can help to change our thoughts towards positivity and
hence
 brightens our moods as in the case of depression.
Music
 has been found to improve the moods in depressed persons tremendously. Traditional
music
 has slots of enormous benefits for any given country it represents because
,
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,
it presents the peculiarities in their culture
,
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,
beliefs as well as their heritage to the world at
large thereby
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large, thereby
 promoting the
economy
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economic
 value of the place.Indian is a perfect
examples as
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example, as
example as
 they present their culture in their
music
 and all the
artifacts
a man-made object taken as a whole
artefacts
 and
this
 has improved tourism in Indian as well as boosting economic returns. Conclusively
,
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,
Conventional
music
 of a country is more pertinent than the cosmopolitan
music
.
Accept space
.

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