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It is believed that young people are more interested in international pop singers and movie stars then in history and historical people.why is this?

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It is an undeniable fact that, people consider
history
 a boring
subject some people
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subject, some people
 believe that youngsters have huge knowledge about international pop and movie stars. While, they do not know about the famous people from
history
 of their Nation.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons and solution of
this
 issue. To
comments
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comment
 with, their number of reasons by which people do not know about their famous people of
history
.
First
 and foremost, reason is the lack of
interest
.
young
(used of living things especially persons) in an early period of life or development or growth
Young
 people do not have
interest
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an interest
 in the
history
 because they did not know the value of
contribution
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the contribution
a contribution
contributions
 of those people in building of
nation
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a nation
the nation
.
Secondly
, there
are
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is
lack
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a lack
the lack
 of sources which can provide knowledge to
youth
 on
interesting way
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the interesting way
 about the
history
.
Finally due
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Finally, due
 to the rat race of money parents are not forwarding the knowledge of
history
 to their offsprings.
Moreover
,
number
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a number
 of solutions are there which may help to enhance the understanding of
youth
 towards the famous
history
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historical
 people. Most of the
youth
 like to watch movies, so
producers
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the producers
 of movies should make movies on biography of freedom fighters that help to
growth
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grow
 the information of
youth
 about
history
 with
interest
.
Further more parents
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Furthermore, parents
Furthermore parents
 should tell their children about contribution of freedom fighters to make Nation independent, which
increase
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increases
 the value of famous historical figures in their mind. To conclude,
history
 is the backbone of
nation
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the nation
a nation
 so
youth
 should know about the
history
 and government as well as parents
do
engage in
make
 efforts to build up
interest
 of
youth
 towards the
history
.
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