With all the problem in the world today spending money on space exploration is a complete waste of time and money. The money could be better spend on other caus. Do you agree or disagree?

Space
exploration
has boomed in recent years, even
government
investment has risen. Many experts argue that
government
funding should be allocated to other welfare activity. I believe that
space
exploration
will be advantageous for human's in future but we should prioritize to make the earth better.
Space
exploration
can be helpful for scientist to discover new places for human habitation. As exploring will discover new paths for satellite which will track activity in neighbouring planets.
For instance
, Countries around the world are trying to reach planet Mars discover new place where life can survive.
Thus
,
space
exploration
might be helpful in the near future.
However
, The
government
has to look after many other development areas which need to be done to make it a better place to live.
For instance
, Medical condition should be improved, so that human's can have a greater life span. If we improve our current place,
then
there would not be any need to do
space
exploration
. To conclude,
space
exploration
is might be useful in
far futur
Suggestion
the far future
far future
, but the
government
should spend more in current plants welfare of humans so that they can have good present.
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