Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Unnecessary shopping turns human’s requirements into rubbish
.
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.
And
This
appears the cause of increasing rubbish. The main idea behind the essential subject which I would like to observe
is ‘’ do not buy
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doesn’t ’ ’ buy
is ’ ’ not buying
is ’’ do not buy
a lot things if it is not
neccessary
absolutely essential
necessary
to have’’. Three decades ago the
childen
a young person of either sex
children
had not more than 2 or 3 toys or the girls had not more than 2 or 3 shoes,
likewise
; mother did not cook more than sufficient. Briefly, the people dİd not buy anything if it is not
neccesary
absolutely essential
necessary
.
However recently
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However, recently
, The people has not less than
approximetly
(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct
approximately
5 things that they totally do not need at all. When children grow up They throw the toys away. Because They do not need those toys anymore.
For
instance when
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instance, when
I was 10 years old, as far as I am concerned that I had 1000 piece of
legos
chief port and economic center of Nigeria; located in southwestern Nigeria on the Gulf of Guinea; former capital of Nigeria
Lagos
at the least. And
then
What is
happened
Suggestion
happening
that
legos
chief port and economic center of Nigeria; located in southwestern Nigeria on the Gulf of Guinea; former capital of Nigeria
Lagos
legacy
?
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?
İt is not hard to guess. They
has been thrown
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have been thrown
have been throwing
away by me after I had grown up. And the
last
thing is ‘’How can we sort
this
out
?
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?
’’
or
introduces an alternative
Or
‘’What should government do to solve that ‘’ problem. According to
me I
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me, I
cannot say that
government
Suggestion
the government
does not work for his circumstance. But I regret to say that
this
is not enough. They need to release the law which can limit the producing and
manifacturing
the act of making something (a product) from raw materials
manufacturing
. The factories have been producing more than every
last
second
. İn due time İf they could do
this
,
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,
it would be better than how it is now.

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