Some people believe that competitive sports have a positive effect on children’s education, while others believe there is no place for such sports in schools. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Having intention for the sport games

sould

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

would

take

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an

indispensable part in pupil’s life

beacuse

for the reason that; on account of

because

it has more effect than we thought. Even

though according

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though, according

to the some lazy and sluggish parents think sport is just a time sucker, experts have the opposite idea

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of

this

matter. Current social experiments performed that competitive sports hold the super affirmative effect on the children’s self-confidences together with the

proffesors

the highest ranking position for a university academic

professors

professor

who led the research, say it is

also

very useful to learn how to behave if you are on the losing side.

Moreover

, it can improve your group action skills and you might learn how to be

unit

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unified

for

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to

beat the rival. I would like to give an instance fort his conflict. I was at the primary school when ı started attending

chess competition

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chess competitions

and

official

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officiating

officiate

basketball games. İndisputably I learned there how to cope with

compulsories

required by rule

compulsory

and if you want the achievement you need to endeavour for acquiring what you wish.

Afterwards my

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Afterwards, my

examination results started increasing instantly.

Then

i

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I

perceived that it had contributed me a plethora of

caractheristic qualifications

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characteristics, qualifications

characteristics qualifications

in a long time.

Last

but not the least it gives you a power to tackle with your examinations and homeworks.

Moreover if

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Moreover, if

you are interested in

competition

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competitive

games

such

as basketball, football, curling

then

you will be

learned

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learning

how to behave your opponent in

this

sitiuation

the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time

situation

your opponent would be your friends. Briefly, I would like to call out to the parents whose children

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are

keen on competitive sport, to set them free, and it will affect their education life in the way it affected mine.