Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

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Few people are of opinion that it is the responsibility of the schools to hone the skills of children. I disagree with the notion that the educational institutions should be responsible for developing the children into good parents in the future.
This
essay will discuss the reasons for
this
and the requirements to be a skilled parent. It is of paramount importance that the centre of learning should give priority in teaching the academic subjects rather than the parental role
.
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.
Even though the children are made aware of their future role as parents and how to play that effectively, it would in no way help in fetching a job, a successful career or attaining financial stability in
life
which are the most important benefits to be reaped out of education. Another reason
is perhaps
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is, perhaps
, it would not be an effective method
since
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for
the teenagers might not have the maturity to understand the responsibilities of a parent.
This
is because, they have to connect the happenings in their family to the subjects taught in the school, which is again too much strain for a child. In
this
way, it can be argued that teaching the role of parents in schools would not be pragmatically fruitful unless it is intuitively assimilated from their parents and family members. In regard to the competence of a mother or a father, there are several things to be considered;
first
and foremost is the abundance of love and care,
secondly
strict rules to discipline their
life
,
thirdly
responsibility, fourthly doing things that the children would find
inspirational
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inspiration
and
lastly
to be able to educate them. What’s more is
expertness
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expertly
in handling finance so that the children can have a better healthcare, food, education and relaxed
life
. To conclude, the academic subjects should be concentrated and taught in schools, as it had been until now since it is the most integral part education.
This
is not only because of the mindset of juveniles but
also
to extirpate
such
classes and let them learn from their own parents during the course of
life
.
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