Some people believe that the Olympics Games do not have a role in the 21st Century. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.

It is often considered by some that, there

were

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not much importance of the

Olympic

games

in

this

century

.

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,

in

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this

essay fairly

disagree

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with the statement because

,

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sports

events

had

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a vivid place in

peoples

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mind

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and the

nations

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nation's

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too. It is not a valid reason that the technical improvements and innovative inventions of

21st

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the 21st

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century

replace the value of an international

sport

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event like

Olympic

traits like enhancement in physical, financial, social, and so on. The foremost reason for disagreement

that

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,

sports

events

make

people

's capability of the multitude of talent check

up

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and entertainment

activity

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activities

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rather than the materialistic technical

items

.

People

who

are opposing

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the

Olympic

game

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games

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may be by the effects of

games

in computer or smartphone video

games

and so on. Physical thrive in different kinds of

sports

items

often

identify

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the

world

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number one fast

tracker

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, players, and so on.

Secondly

,

Olympic

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the Olympic

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games

would broaden the

horizon

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not

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only the players but

also

the viewers from various nationalities all over the world.

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attributes would not get through

21

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21st-century

century

technological developments.

For instance

, many

people

ascertain the knowledge regarding various

sports

items

and the wide range of nationalities presence would be available in one stadium.

Likewise

,

Olympic

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games

would enhance the financial status of many nations and Olympians. Since, make use of

such

programs would

flourish

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boost

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the economy

by

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tourists, players, delegates and far distant inhabitants of a host country. Despite that,

such

events

may

devoid

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of cultural diversity and enhance

the

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trade and commerce to some extent. Even though, in

twenty first

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century

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importance of economic development has been inevitable

by

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many aspects.

To sum up

,

although

, there was controversy related to

Olympic

events

, the emerging criteria which

people

would not get by technology could be achieved by the numerous

sports

items

held on

Olympic

day. Since

,

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anyone could not suggest

to avoid

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such

games

.