In many countries day by day rubbish(garbage) is increasing. Why is it happening? What can be done?

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of

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is progressively rising (

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to it to make it more coherent) One of the major causes of

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garbage in many countries

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problem (,) especially among developing nations (,) is poor management of funds by

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Agencies governmental agencies in charge of keeping the environment clean.

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government

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earmarks a certain amount of money for environmental cl

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cleaning, sanitation

yet after disbursement to to its agents, no meaningful impact is seen in the environment as everywhere is seen littered with refuse.

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, Lagos, a city in Nigeria, was previously known to be a clean State state during the tenor tenure of the former Governor, (no comma) Raji Fashola.

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, in recent times, a significant rise in garbage has been seen, and

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has been attributed to funds mismanagement by the agents responsible; (,) LASTMA.

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, these days, there is an

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in the purchase of fast food, and dr

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nowadays, and

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s most commuters are seen thrashing the used cans on the road, some even through the windows of their vehicles with no regards to the environmental ha

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a source of danger; a possibility of incurring loss or misfortune

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can cause. A research conducted by Professor Femi, a lecturer in the University of Lagos, revealed a relationship between debris

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and

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should be educated on about the drawbacks of indiscriminate refuse disposal as

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may be detrimental to their health and to the environment. If the

government

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can organise seminars or campaigns on the negative effects of refuse disposal (,) even if it means providing free transportation for people to attend, there will be a significant decrease in refuse

accumulation

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. A recently organised campaign by Kogi State University students led to a massive decrease in

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in Kogi State, as

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was properly documented by the students of Kogi State University (

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can educate. You don't need Kogis

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, governments should could (don't use instructional words in talking about solutions. Hedging/softening is better) put laws in place to pu

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unish offenders who are seen to throw disposing garbage indiscriminately, as

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may be a good measure to decrease the

accumulation

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of

rubbish

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.

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, in China, there is a law that forbids the disposal of

rubbish

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inappropriately; Offenders are sentenced to 6 months jail term if caught violating the law. Surprisingly,

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brought a significant reduction in the amount of litters seen on the streets of China. (E

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