Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our intelligence through learning. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

No one can judge

intelligence

by

looks but

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looks, but

IQ level

Suggestion

the IQ level

an IQ level

of any person is considered as perimeter of

intelligence

.

Therefore

, many people debate that high

intelligence

is only with them who are smart by birth. In contrary, others argue that it could be achieved with the process of sheer learning.

This

essay will discuss both the views and put the

writers

Suggestion

writer's

opinion in the end. Looking at the

first

side

, which says that innate

intelligence

is the real

intelligence

because we all have

listened

detected or perceived by the sense of hearing

heard

and seen the stories of child prodigies who have achieved way more in their childhood

then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

others could even throughout their career.

For instance

, the famous story of an

indian

a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived

Indian

child who can beat calculator or computer when it comes to memory and computation of large numbers. No one can learn

such

talent from any

school but

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school, but

its pure gift which these people have by birth.Resultantly, nothing can be more handy than natural

intelligence

. On the other

side

, there are people who have reached to zenith of their career just because of

persistant

never-ceasing

persistent

learning and practice

,

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,

even though, if they were not considered as very smart brain in their childhood. One

such

eample

an item of information that is typical of a class or group

example

is of Thomas Edison, who failed 100 times in his

eperiments

the act of conducting a controlled test or investigation

experiments

and still gained the highest reputation as an inventor which others can not match with.

This

hapened

come to pass

happened

only because of his

consistant

(sometimes followed by 'with') in agreement or consistent or reliable

consistent

approach of learning and gaining from his failures. In conclusion, we have clear

evidance

your basis for belief or disbelief; knowledge on which to base belief

evidence

of people who are doing great by birth and

also

who have achieved greatness by acquiring knowledge

thoughout

all the way through

throughout

their lifetime.

Therefore

, in my

opinion I

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opinion, I

will leave

this

to the readers to choose a

side

from as I

can not

can not

cannot

justify which

side

outweighs the other.