You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter • introduce yourself • explain what is wrong with the furniture • say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .................,

Dear
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Salem,
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, let me introduce myself. I am Mostapha Helou, who is
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resident of apartment K8 in
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Jawhari complex
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yours
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. I am writing to you to report our dissatisfaction
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the state of some of the commodities which reside in our rented flat.
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, with all the bad
condition
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that most of the living room's furniture suffers, I am shedding the light on
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worse state of the kitchen. The sink keeps on getting blocked even after the smallest amount of water
spilled
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within.
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its
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closets have loose or broken shelves, which makes it impossible to store anything in them. I am humbly requesting you to drop us a visit to check the damages within the apartment, assess, and take drastic measures to make it habitable.
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would make our stay more pleasant and your mind better relieved from complaints. Thanks in advance for your fine understanding and kind consideration. Waiting to hear from you the soonest. Regards, Mostapha Helou
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear
  • I am writing to express my dissatisfaction
  • regarding
  • the condition
  • furniture
  • belongings
  • for instance
  • damaged
  • broken
  • worn-out
  • appliance
  • household items
  • it is unacceptable
  • inconvenient
  • inhabitable
  • affecting
  • negatively
  • urgent attention
  • replacement
  • repair
  • resolve
  • maintenance
  • prompt response
  • Thank you for your attention
  • Yours sincerely
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