Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, parents and schools have an important place on
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offspring's
education
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. In my opinion,
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is the role of both of them to help children to be a good citizen. In
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essay, I will discuss both parts of
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topic and give several reasons to support my point-view. Parents are in charge of their infant
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. They help them to distinguish
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between a
positive and a negative action.
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, when they are young they teach them that hit someone is bad,
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on the other hand
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helping a poor person by giving him some food is a good action.
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, the child learns basic knowledge which will help him in the
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the time yet to come
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to be an
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very good;of the highest quality
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,
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the school
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a role
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, they teach them
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concerned with work or important matters rather than play or trivialities
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as laws.
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, by
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like better; value more highly
preferring
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students
, the teacher
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impart skills or knowledge to
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them to be no selfish.
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, they assist their
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until their majority. In conclusion, parents and schools are in charge of the
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offspring's
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, perhaps not at the same level.
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, I believe that school
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complete the parents one.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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