The government should allocate more funding to teach science rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree?
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science
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science
rather than any other subject
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country
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rather than focus on only one Suggestion
subjects
subject
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improvement
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improvements
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,
administration should be focused on teaching Accept space
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science
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country
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a strong economy and it will make a Suggestion
having
country
developed .
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thus
became them the powerhouse of this
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instances
boster
that, advance technology can support and strengthen
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country
.
Despite some amenities of focusing to
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on
science
,
the idea that in order to Accept space
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developed
and progress a Suggestion
develop
country
,
only prioritize to Accept space
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science
is totally preposterous. Since ,
every individual Accept space
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subject
have
their own effects on society Suggestion
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such
as business ,
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art, etc
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thus
the administration of a country
must be focus to each subject
, so that a country
can properly develope
. make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
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France Italy
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France, Italy
business
so that there can be more developed. Overall, no Nation can Suggestion
businesses
progres
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progress
science
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In conclusion, this
essay discussed that only estimating a budget for science
teaching can not develop a country
without focusing all subject
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subjects
.
In my opinion the ministry of education should allocate budget for all kinds of Accept space
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subject
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