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In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting.

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Renting a
house
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 is becoming more popular than owning
one
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. A few individuals opine that it is better to
rent
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 a
house
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;
however
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, others say that
one
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 should invest to buy their own home.
This
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 essay will demonstrate how it can be advantageous to
rent
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 a
house
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 and what problems
one
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 might face. The
first
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 and foremost advantage is location preference. For a middle-class person, it is not possible to buy a home amidst city, thereby they can easily
rent
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 it without worrying about their budget. Not only it is easy for them to commute to their
workplaces but
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workplaces, but
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 it can save their precious time, which might have been wasted in traffic,
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.
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 to
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, they are not accounted for maintenance that they might have been doing while staying in their own
house
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 and they are flooded with various options if they need to relocate either because of lack of amenities or their office is shifted somewhere else. To cite an instance, it has been widely seen that if people switch their jobs, they
rent
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 a new accommodation. It is irrefutable to say that having their own home is everyone's dream. People do feel uneasy in rented homes due to various reasons
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 as denial of the landlord to provide a PAN card for tax rebate, fixing
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of many different kinds purposefully arranged but lacking any uniformity
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 renovations related problems and paying the payment online. Owners, nowadays, are taking advantage of it and not listening to the any requests made by tenants. As per the survey conducted by 'The Times of India' in December 2018, 7 out of 10 people are struggling to get
income tax rebate
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an income tax rebate
 on account of their rented property as landlords are not providing them with PAN number. To conclude, renting a
house
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 is a
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
 option if
one
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 wants to avoid traffic while driving to their office,
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 the same can be a problem when it comes to managing their tax rebate and other expenses
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 as maintenance.

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