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Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual person or individual countries.In other words,it is the international problem . To what extent do you agree or disagrees

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Introduction
At present, the fact is acceptable the severe issues of environment cannot be solved by taking the recourse of individualism; whether it is related to a person or a country. Is
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 an international agenda? Of course, it is. To put in another way, these situations must be considered as the international crisis. I truly believe; that, team efforts and consensus are way more effective than the individual's efforts.
Body paragraph 1
Currently, many of the nations are experiencing the disastrous environmental defects. So far, the biggest root cause of these calamities is ozone depletion, which is communal for worldwide.
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 to it; contemporary lifestyle is aggravating these key issues rather than demolishing the causing factors which are irrefutably acute as well as lethal;
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, current reliance on fossil fuels, I feel, almost all countries are daunted by being habitual. I completely agree that all the countries must join each other and address
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 problem's on an international platform.
Body paragraph 2
To overcome, the bureaucrats ought to advocate certain legislations as well gigantic steps towards resolution. As we all know if we propel the bicycle riding; dependency of vehicles would be plummet which will result into pollution deterrent. Apart from
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 the government policies of maintaining the countryside in equal ratio of modernised societies. As far as I know, we directly cannot combat with the natural catastrophe;
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 remedial measure will play a pivotal role in the emerging from natural catastrophe like global warming; the major contributing factor of ozone devastation.
Conclusion
To conclude, the ecological conditions are the biggest concern worldwide.
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, despite managing it nationwide or individually, we must tackle it universally, as healthy environment is needed for each country; either it is Australia or Syria, and I totally agree with the statement.

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