The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world’s largest cities as well as the population distribution in urban and rural areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph compares the
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, the line graph analyses the global Linking Words
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Tokyo
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Bombay
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outranked other Use synonyms
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Finally
, more people started to live in Linking Words
cities
after 2005 despite a different scenario in earlier years.
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Tokyo
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Bombay
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population
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exceeded all other Use synonyms
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Tokyo
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Jakarta
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cities
Tokyo
which stood first on the chart with over 27 million citizens.
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Finally
, the global urban Linking Words
population
in 1980 was below 2 Use synonyms
billion
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3 Linking Words
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lived in villages. The Use synonyms
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grew steadily and went over 4 Use synonyms
billion
in 2010 at which point 3 Use synonyms
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resided in rural areas.Use synonyms
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