The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world’s largest cities as well as the population distribution in urban and rural areas. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph compares the
population
growth
in five
large cities
between 1970 and 2010 while
the table lists down
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five
most populous cities
in the world both in 1950 and 2010. In addition
, the line graph analyses the global population
in rural and urban areas.
Overall
, Tokyo
had the largest population
in 2010 but the population
growth
in Bombay
and Jakarta
outranked other cities
. Finally
, more people started to live in cities
after 2005 despite a different scenario in earlier years.
As the data suggests, Tokyo
had over 15 million residents in 1970 which was three and five
times higher than that of Bombay
and Jakarta
respectively. New York and Shanghai had approximately 14 and 12 million inhabitants in
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this
year. After two decades, New York witnessed a meagre population
growth
while
it was dramatic both in Jakarta
and Bombay
. It is evident that population
growth
in Jakarta
and Bombay
exceeded all other cities
.
In 1950, New York, London, Tokyo
, Paris and Moskow were the top five
populous cities
in the world. In 2010 Bombay
, Lagos, Shanghai and Jakarta
ranked in the list by eliminating all other cites
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cities
Tokyo
which stood first on the chart with over 27 million citizens.
Finally
, the global urban population
in 1980 was below 2 billion
while
3 billion
lived in villages. The population
in cities
grew steadily and went over 4 billion
in 2010 at which point 3 billion
global population
resided in rural areas.Submitted by ludoscutu on
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