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using computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children. do you agree or disagree? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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With the technology development, the past decades have seen the increasing popularity using the computers. It is widely debated whether the
advance
Suggestion
advancement
 in the technology contributed to side-effects.
This
 essay will argue that actually the advantages of it outweigh the disadvantages and will provide two reasons to elucidate. It might be claimed that comparing with the past the internet addiction has become common, but it
also
 brought the benefits on several aspects in our life. One indisputable benefit is that the availability of the variety of resources increased.
Thus
, the knowledge and the
information
 can be spread without efforts so that it fostered the advances in several aspects.
For instance
, before the internet became common, people
had had
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
had
 to rely on the newspaper or the books to get the knowledge and the
information
, which contributed to a higher expenditure on getting and sharing the
information
;
however
, nowadays,
computer
 made it easier.
In addition
 to an increasing availability of the
information
, another benefit using
computer
 brought is that people can keep abreast with the time. A case in point is that with the
globalization knowing
Accept comma addition
globalization, knowing
 abroad and domestic news became necessary, and the best method to get news is using
computer
Suggestion
the computer
a computer
computers
.
Therefore
, it is evident that using technology devices
has become
Suggestion
have become
 inevitable. In conclusion, based on the above factors, using
computer
Suggestion
a computer
computers
the computer
 can be
inffered
reason by deduction; establish by deduction
inferred
 that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, and that's why I take issue with it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Screen time
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Physical inactivity
  • Cognitive development
  • Internet addiction
  • Cyberbullying
  • Inappropriate content
  • Digital literacy
  • Virtual learning environments
  • Parental controls
  • Moderation
  • Online safety
  • Tech-savvy
  • E-learning
  • Information technology
  • Eye strain
  • Social skills
  • Multitasking
  • Interactive education
  • Health repercussions
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