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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is a common opinion of
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
 group of people that, a foreign
language
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 should be learnt for travelling or to find a job in an another country. For some, it is of the opinion that
,
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,
 there are more additional reasons to learn another
language
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. I will highlight some of the reasons which will be depicted in the upcoming paragraph.
Language
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 is one of the most important
tool
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tools
 for a
person
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 to communicate, interact and even express
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thier
of them or themselves
their
 intense feelings.It should be understood that every individual will be comfortable to communicate in their local common
language
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 and their linguistic ability will always highlight their culture of their community. So, while travelling outside it is mandatory and imperative to understand and assimilate the local
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language thereby
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language, thereby
 an individual can be easily adjusted to
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thier
of them or themselves
their
 culture with ease and communication with the locals will become more friendly.
For example
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,
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,
 France is a country where they are proud of
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thier
of them or themselves
their
 French
language
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.
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.
They insist individuals to stick towards French to every foreigner who visits
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thier
of them or themselves
their
there
 country so that interactions with the common people evolve as a friendly nature.
In addition
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 to the above paragraph, there are more reasons to learn a
language
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.When a
person
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become
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becomes
 ready to learn a new
language
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,
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,
 his/her linguistic ability and the creative part of the brain will eventually improve thereby differentiating them from the common crowd. It is a common observation that a
person
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 who understands more languages will think more with
complexity
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the complexity
 and solves problems in just a matter of time.
Furthermore
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,
languge
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
 skills is an important attribute to be a part of a corporate company,
since
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for
 marketing and business
solely runs
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solely run
 on a linguistic ability. In conclusion, a foreign
language
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 is not only for
job
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a job
jobs
the job
 or travel
,
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,
infact it
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in fact, it
in fact it
 is needed for growth and development of an individual to be a part of any society. In my opinion, I agree to the fact that foreign
language
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 study is important and it allows a
person
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 to travel, work
,
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,
sharing emotions
,
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,
 maintaining
buisness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
 relationship and enhance overall development of a
person
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.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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