Write a letter to a friend who is looking for a part time job to support his studies. In your letter - Describe the job you found for him/her - Explain why this job is good for him/her - Say what he/she needs to do to get the job

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Dear Sara, I hope

this

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. When we met

last

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week, you mentioned that you are searching for a part-time

job

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to finance your expenditure, and

this

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is the reason I am writing to you today. Yesterday, I met my old friend, Prachi who owns a beauty

parlor

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parlour

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in Gachibowli. Her business is flourishing right now as many colleges have opened in a nearby area and so she was searching for an assistant, especially in the peak evening hours. When I mentioned that you were looking for a part-time

job

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, she seemed very eager to contact you and talk about employment possibilities. I thought

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job

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will be perfect for you as you are free in the evening, and you have done

certificate

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course in beautician, and is well aware of waxing, threading, and facials. The

job

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will be from 5 pm to 8 pm and you will be getting around 5000 rupees plus incentives based on your performance.

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, if you work on Sundays, you will get extra income

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. I hope

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opportunity piques your interest. You can contact Prachi if you are interested in the

job

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. Her number is 945903582. With Love, Richa

Thu Jan 09 2020

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

206 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Part-time job
Supportive work environment
Flexibility
Compensation
Schedule
Relevance
Opportunity
Field of study
Experience
Application process
Resume
Cover letter
Submission
Qualifications
Interview
Enthusiasm
Aptitude

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The Closing

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