The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The tables illustrate the
amount
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of potatoes which have been consumed and produced by five different continents in 2006. Units are measured in
kg
per person for consumption and
million
tonnes
for production.
Overall
, regarding
the
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consumption, it can be seen that
Europe
had shown the highest data among the other places,
while
the lowest intake had been experienced by Africa. In terms of production , the major
potatoe
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potato
producers were
Europe
and Asia. In 2006, only 14.1
kg
per person of potatoes
have
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been eaten in Africa, followed by South and
Centra
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America
and Asia which
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accounted
23.6
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kg and 25.8
kg
respectively.
Then
North
America
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reached 57.9
kg
, succeeded by
Europe
which
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reported the most relevant value of 96.1kg. Regarding the producers, South and Central
America
with Africa have presented similar data ( 15.6 and 16,4
million
tonnes
respectively),
as well as
North
America
has contributed
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24.7
million
tonnes
.
Europe
has produced 126.3
million
tonnes
of potatoes, similar to Asia , which has collected 131.2million
tonnes
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