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The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table data provides information on
potato
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consumption
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 and production in different parts of the world in 2006.
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, average
potato
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 intake in Europe was the highest
while
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Asia
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 and Europe were the major
potato
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 producers in 2006. As the data suggests, an average European ate slightly over 96 kilograms
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potato
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 in 2006 which was higher than
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potato
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consumption
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 in other parts of the world. With roughly 58
kg
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potato
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consumption
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 per person in 2006, North America stood at the
second
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 top position.
Asia
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, despite its highest
potato
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 accumulation, accounted for roughly 26
kg
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 per person
potato
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 intake. South and Central American citizens ate more than 23
kg
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 per person
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 the least
potato
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consumption
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 could be observed in Africa, just over 14
kg
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 per African. Asian countries produced over 131 million tonnes
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potato
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 in 2006 which was significantly higher than the
potato
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 growth in Africa and America. Europe’s
potato
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 harvesting was the
second
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 largest, approximately 5 million tonnes less than that of
Asia
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. It is worth noticing that
Asia
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 and Europe were the principal
potato
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 growers in
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words potato, consumption, asia, kg with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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