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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Every country has its own transportation
system
 which they need to look after
time
 to
time
 for improvisation.
Furthermore
, we can easily find people balking at the new proposed trains which takes
hefty amount
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a hefty amount
 during construction but are fast and equipped with modern instruments. As they want the tax payers money to be spent on
current railway
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the current railway system
system
 to ease their problems in
present
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presenting
 and I think
this
 idea has
higher value proposition
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a higher value proposition
.
Accept space
.
 To look at the
first
 side of
this
 essay, Whenever a government announces new railway project with high speed trains, it draws lots of attention from
public
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the public
. Due to the positive sides of the project advertised
such
 as the latest trains will have unmatched security features
,
Accept space
,
 journey
time
 will be reduced to half
,
Accept space
,
 and they will
hav
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
have
 all the
lastest
up to the immediate present; most recent or most up-to-date
latest
 technology for
probiding
give something useful or necessary to
providing
leaisure
time available for ease and relaxation
leisure
lesser
time
 to the passengers. Undoubtedly, these trains are
best hope
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the best hope
 for
future but
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the future, but
the future but
 they will incur large sum from the
taxpayers
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taxpayers'
 pockets without helping
in
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at
 the current state of transportation.
On the other hand
, if the money is spent for the betterment of
availaible
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
 transport resources, it will solve some problems of the daily passengers.
For example
, people commuting to their offices have to bear the consequences of being late because the
trains
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train
 frequency is about two trains in an hour.
Therefore
, if the government can add new trains in the current list
,
Accept space
,
 it is going to make the public life merry
to go
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go
.
Accept space
.
 In conclusion,
cost
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the cost
 of new trains does bother people because it
put
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puts
unnecessory
not necessary
unnecessary
 burden on them without solving their
every day
found in the ordinary course of events
everyday
 issues. While the money spent
over existing
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over an existing system
system
 can be easily experienced by them.
Therefore
, I support the improvisation of present
system
 rather than new lines.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
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