It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people think that
alot
Suggestion
a lot
of human beings have
born
Suggestion
borne
with special talents
such
as
soprt
an active diversion requiring physical exertion and competition
sport
or music while others believe
that is
not true. In
this
essay, I will
examin
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
examine
both sides and give my opinion to support one side. Some people have born with amazing
talent
and they can be creative in their
on
belonging to or on behalf of a specified person (especially yourself); preceded by a possessive
own
field.
This
is
true statement
Suggestion
a true statement
for a few people. They think that a person can be creative and have a special
talent
eventhogh
he might not have an
experiance
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
or good
education
.
For example
, Albet
Anestine
physicist born in Germany who formulated the special theory of relativity and the general theory of relativity; Einstein also proposed that light consists of discrete quantized bundles of energy (later called photons) (1879-1955)
Einstein
was dummy and left the school
ealy
at or near the beginning of a period of time or course of events or before the usual or expected time
early
earlier
in his life so he did not have a high
education
.
Eventhogh
he did not have a
high
Suggestion
higher
education
, he
invinted
come up with (an idea, plan, explanation, theory, or principle) after a mental effort
invented
the electricity.
Thats
Suggestion
That's
mean the
education
is not essential if someone has the
talent
.
In addition
, he did not have an experience in
electricty
a physical phenomenon associated with stationary or moving electrons and protons
electricity
field because he had not worked for an
electricty
a physical phenomenon associated with stationary or moving electrons and protons
electricity
company.
Nevertheless
, I
bleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that is
not true.
In contrast
,
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
gruop
any number of entities (members) considered as a unit
group
groups
of people
think
Suggestion
thinks
that
talent
is not born with
anyone
. They think that
anyone
can get the
talent
after some period of working hard and getting enough
experiance
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
. To
illusterate
clarify by giving an example of
illustrate
, after
anyone
get
Suggestion
gets
enough work
experiance
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
in his field, he or she could invent
somthing
an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
that is
special. I
khonw
informal term for a meal
chow
one of my
friend
Suggestion
friends
, who are a fast reader. He could read faster with comprehension. He told me that after he has worked in a newspaper company as a proofreader, he could read faster. His
talet
natural abilities or qualities
talent
tale
has been
aquired
gotten through environmental forces
acquired
occurred
after he spent
long period
Suggestion
long periods
a long period
of
rproofreading
read for errors
proofreading
a huge number of articles. To sum,
talent
is a trait that some people think it is inherited while
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
think
that is
not true. In my
opinion I
Accept comma addition
opinion, I
think that
talent
is not born with
anyone
.
In addition
, it is
aquied
gotten through environmental forces
acquired
after
Suggestion
over
a long period of
traing
activity leading to skilled behavior
training
and hard working.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innate talent
  • Nurture
  • Prodigy
  • Proficiency
  • Deliberate practice
  • Physiological factors
  • Grit
  • Perseverance
  • Cultural norms
  • Structured training
  • Physical predisposition
  • Natural aptitude
  • Dedicated training
  • Societal influence
  • Passion
  • Genetic endowment
  • Skill acquisition
  • Expertise
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Mastery
  • Cognitive abilities
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