The maps show the park which was built in 1920 and current construction of the park.

The two plans illustrate a public

park

established in 1920 and the same

park

now.

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part was built in a rectangular area with access from Arnold Avenue in the northern direction and from

the

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Eldon street in the southern direction.

Likewise

, there was a fountain occupying the central area

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and a stage for musicians situated

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the left side of the fountain.

In addition

, a glasshouse to the right of

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Eldon street and a pond for

water

plants on the northeast corner opposite.

Moreover

, around the edges of the

park

, there were rose gardens with seats.

On the other hand

, the part has altered considerably since

then

. Now, there is a gigantic rose garden where

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stood, with seats all around it.

Similarly

, one of the smaller rose

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remains on the north side of the

park

.

However

, the stage for musicians

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by an amphitheatre for the concerts.

Subsequently

, a

water

feature adds by superseding a glasshouse and the seats.

Following

this

, a pond for

water

plants has

also

been gone and in

this

place,

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area has been built for the children with a cafe nearby.

Lastly

, though access to the

park

is still remained

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via the two authentic entrances, there is now a

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entrance near

to

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the

water

feature from an underground car

park

.