Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree

These days, the rate of migration is being increased than over the past decades. It is vitally essential for immigrants to adapt to

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accept

the rules of

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

in their adopted

country

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there are valid arguments to the

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. I strongly agree with

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statement. Despite the cultural individualism, the modern world has broadened people’s horizons. As said above, it is undeniable that immigrated people should observe the laws of their adopted

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. One of the major causes is that obeying

rules

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the rules

leads

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lead

to sake of social order. Take my uncle as an example. When he had lived in an abroad, he accepted to drive on

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the same side

of the road regardless of many

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differences

of laws in his home

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. Two

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instances of practices which are permitted in some countries and prohibited in others are possession of firearms and gambling. Indeed, all-immigrants could not refuse their new

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’s rules and regulations as essential segment.

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to

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obligatory consideration, accepting

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the new country’s rules

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’s rules can

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act as the best way of

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maintaining

the lives of immigrants.

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, if they refuse to obey the general regulations of their employment sectors, they would be much more likely to

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terminate

. With respect to the termination of employment, my

neighbors

a person who lives (or is located) near another

neighbours

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, more than 10% have returned to their home

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from overseas.

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, particularly the education sector holds the equivalent importance. When

newcomers study

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the newcomers study

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of

an alienating culture, they not only require the capacity to bare entire objections but

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need to

adapt

choose and follow; as of theories, ideas, policies, strategies or plans

adopt

local customs.

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, clearly, every immigrant need to obey the rules.

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and more importantly, in order to maintain societal cohesion it is essential to respect social norms of their adopted

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. Of course, immigrants in Sri Lanka, having a mixture of different cultures and traditions

gives

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give

a

country

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colour and vibrancy.

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, too much diversity undermines a society by alienating people from each other. Indeed, similarities unite people, whereas differences have a tendency to divide.

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, when newcomers accepted and respected local customs, society

would be become

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would become

homogenious which

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homogeneous, which

homogeneous which

homogenous which

is known as a strong society. In conclusion, immigrated people should observe the rules and regulations of their adopted

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as lead healthy lives.

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, I tend to agree with

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view.

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,

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issue likely to become even more important in the foreseeable future as

border

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the border

a border

between countries

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becomes

increasingly blurred.