There have been some problems with the bus servicing, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company, in your letter: Describe what the problems are Explain how these problems are affecting you Suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to inform you, about the problem I am facing with the bus servicing in my area over the
last
two weeks. The main problem is that
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the bus is having engine problems with it which
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causing enormous sound pollution, as well as air pollution from its exhaust in my area.
Moreover
, there are no technicians in the nearby area to repair it instantly.
This
issue has been troubling me, as its high horn sound is creating
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nuisance in our society and affecting our health situation.
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elderly people are suffering the most because of
this
situation.
In addition
, there is no supervisor or concerned person to monitor the situation in our community. I would like the firm to please look into
this
matter and solve
this
query at the earliest. Please do the needful at the earliest. I shall be very grateful to you. Your's sincerely Syed Ahsan

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