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write a letter to restaurant that you had dinner last night

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 considered letter to express my appreciation to the
head-chef
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head chef

The word head-chef doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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 for the high-quality service and foods that my family and I were served
last
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 night. Your restaurant possesses so many aspects that fascinated me. As a starting point, the waiter who welcomed us at the entrance seemed very professional and he accompanied us to our reserved seats. All the waiters were certainly familiar with food etiquette;
therefore
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, they did not approach too much to not disturb while they were serving our food.
Secondly
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, we had reserved a table for 10 people including my colleagues for my 20th birthday, and our seats were arranged in a suitable spot where other customers would not bother us. When it comes to the most significant factor which is menu and food, the menu
composed
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is composed

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 of
wide
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a wide
the wide

The noun phrase wide variety seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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 variety of foods and wine.
In addition
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, the foods left unforgettable deliciousness in my mouth which indicates the quality of the restaurant. As a final point, the special room that we were provided had
suitable
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a suitable

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 and comfortable environment with
classis
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classic

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music which helped me to refresh my mind and let go of stress. To summarize, we are extremely impressed and satisfied with the service we were given. I assure you that I will absolutely recommend your place to my friends.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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