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Some people think that young people should choose their professions themselves. Others believe that their parents should choose for them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Deciding on what
career
 or profession to pursue are often difficult to make. It should be given some serious thoughts before making a choice because your future depends on it. Other people believe that youngsters should choose their future
career
 while oth
er ar
any of various alternatives; some other
another
gues that parents should choose for them. Personally, I believe that young people should be the one to decide on what
career
 path they would like to take and not their parents. One of the prerequisites for happiness is doing what you really love and what you are passionate about and one way to achieve
that is
 choosing a
career
 path on your own. Individuals who choose their own
career
 tend to become successful because they are more likely to strive to achieve excellence in a profession they like. Individuals
also
 know their weaknesses and capabilities better than anybody else which enables them to make the right choice.
On the other hand
, it is a common practice to some that parents choose a
career
 for their children. There is no doubt that they are more experienced and have bet
ter understanding to
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a better understanding
di
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of
fferent things. As they say “Parents knows best”
therefore
 their opinion
also
 matters. To conclude,
although
 Parents just want nothing but the best for their children, it is better that young people should make a decision for themselves because oftentimes success is not on
ho
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about
w much money you gai
n but it
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gain, but
 is finding your passion, doing what makes you happy and being fulfilled with what you do.

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