Some countries have introduced a law to limit working hours for employers, why? Do you think is it a positive or negative development?

Having employment is very important for human, not only to earn livelihood, but
also
for personal development. In some developed countries, there is law limiting
hours
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the hours
of
work
per person, means one is entitled to get maximum thirty hours per week employment
for example
. It is believed that by restricting
numbers
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the numbers
of hours worked is
positive development
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a positive development
for the reasons of job available for everyone, leisure
time
and increases productivity, etc.
Firstly
, it gives opportunity to
work
everyone in society by restricting hours of
work
for workers. Some money-minded people always wanted to earn more money, and never let colleagues
to
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work
work
overtime.
Therefore
, there is
need
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a need
needed
the need
to enforce laws like
this
so as to share
available
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the available work
work
equally among employees.
However
,
problem
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the problem
could
also
be solved by Government requiring them to pay more tax on the base of overtime hours worked.
Secondly
, it creases
time
for employees and families and
hence
relationships get strengthens.
Moreover
, as recent statistics have shown, working class members always complain not having enough
time
for themselves.
As a result
of restriction on working hours, if one worked 6 hours during weekdays, must be required to take
weekend
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weekends
off. They could utilise their free
time
to relax and pursue other activities, and perhaps could visit park, museum, and zoo, etc.
with
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With
children. As is creates more jobs,
this
mean someone else could take the opportunity to
work
on
weekend
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the weekend
weekends
a weekend
, it could perfectly suit student studying on weekdays.
Finally
, there is
strong possibility
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a strong possibility
of making mistakes at
work
if one is tired physically and mentally by working 10-14 hours a day. Errors could be
eliminating
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eliminated
allocating 5-6 hours of shift
work
per staff,
consequently
, a person finishes their shift happily and returns to
work
next day
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the next day
with
energetic
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energy
and
fresh mind
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a fresh mind
, and
therefore
it
also
increases the productivity of companies.
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