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Technology has seen a drastic change over these decades. Machine Learning and Artificial Intelligence from the fanciful concept becoming an everyday reality and are ushering another industrial revolution. To upscale my knowledge in
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Of Stuttgart. My Undergraduate education at
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Visvesvaraya College of Engineering gave me a solid and comprehensive foundation in Computer Science. From the initial years of Engineering, I found interest in Programming and solving the problems, which had a real impact.
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made tracking easy. In my final year of Engineering took an Internship opportunity at Dell R&D. Worked on Automation tools to validate customized settings file and customer-facing documents which were done earlier manually and were prone to a lot of errors.
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helped me to get industry exposure and take the full-time opportunity in the same organization upon completing my graduation. Initial years at Dell I was part of the Web Services Protocol validation team. Got in-depth understanding of Dell’s Remote Systems Management, defined test strategy and contributed to important software releases. Noteworthy mention was an automation framework implementation that involved generating performance comparison metrics, memory and CPU trend analysis.
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was formed to resolve hardware parts tracking problems faced in the site. The pursuit of more challenges and zeal about programming inspired me to take the Software Development role. I was at the forefront of driving the important features and resolving blocking issues in the releases. Along with ongoing activities wrote two Technical Whitepaper and filed a patent. In these 4 years at Dell received various
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of Stuttgart I have been influenced by the work culture of the
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excited about Cyber Valley
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group and particularly Prof. Michael Sedlmair works on, how complex data can be displayed in a real context with the new interaction possibilities which are suitable for AR and VR technologies. The location of the
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allows me to continue the research track to pursue a
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