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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?

#parents #pressure #children #reason #development
POPULATION OF WORLD IS INCREASING DRASTICALLY
AS A RESULT
 THERE IS GREAT COMPTETION FOR JOBS AS WELL.UNDER
THIS
 WORLD FULL OF COMPTETION PARENTS ARE TRYING THEIR LEVEL BEST TO ADD CHILDREN IN THAT RACE WHERE THEY CAN SURVIVE IN
BETTER WAY
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A BETTER WAY
. I WILL EXPLAIN IN MY ESSAY BOTH ASPECTS OF
SUCH
 DEVELOPMENT PARENTS WANTS THEIR CHILDREN AT BEST POSITION IN THEIR LIFE.FOR
THIS
 PURPOSE THEY SEND THEM IN BEST SCHOOLS.TEACH THEM OTHER SKILLS AS WELL LIKE SINGING
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SWIMMING
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PAINTING.THEY PRESSURIZED THEM TO GET BEST GRADES
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TODAY
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CHILDREN START GOING TO SCHOOL AT VERY YOUNG AGE IN PAKISTAN SCHOOL START GIVE ADMISSION TO CHILDRENS AT AGE OF THREE.PARENTS COMPTETIVE ATTITUDE PLAY VITAL RULE FOR
SUCH
 ATTITUDE.RATHER THAN DISCOVERING THEIR ABILITIES THEY START COMPAIRING THEM WITH OTHER CHILDREN OF THEIR AGE.AS RESULT THEIR GIFTED SKILL NEVER GET CHANCE AND THEY BECOME AVERAGE GROWING YOUNG MINDS. EXERTING TO MUCH PRESSURE HAS SERIOUS NEGATIVE IMPACT AS WELL.IT CAUSE SERIOUS MENTAL ILLNESS.A REPORT SAID THAT IT IS MAJOR CAUSE OF DEPRESSION AND
THAT EVEN
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THAT, EVEN
 IN SOME CASES LEAD TO SUCIDE
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IF U PUSH YOUR CHILD TO EXCEL THEY WILL LOSE THEIR SELF ESTEEM
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SOME THEY ADOPT NEGATIVE WAYS TO GET GOOD GRADES. I CONCLUDE MY ESSAY ON
THIS
 POINT THAT RATHER THAN PRODUCING CREATIVE SKILLED MINDS
SUCH
 ATTITUDE DAMAGE THEIR ABILITIES FOR EVER
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SO RATHER THAN ADOPTING TYPICAL FORMULA OF SUCCESS PARENTS SHOULD OBSERVE THEIR INTREST AND HELP THEM TO FOLLOW THEIR PATH.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Excessive pressure
  • Academic achievements
  • Professional success
  • Secure future
  • Social comparison
  • Competitive environment
  • Psychological impact
  • Stress and anxiety
  • Resilience
  • Work ethic
  • Emotional well-being
  • Supportive parenting
  • Achievements
  • Life skills
  • Balance
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