Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
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getting married in their thirties not in their twenties.
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age
of thirty or more.
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of all, from preceding all others in time or space or degree
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everyone
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, people stay more stressed when they see that they are running out of cash. Linking Words
working
long hours just to pay the monthly expense is not the right option to choose.
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secondly
, with Suggestion
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age
a person has more knowledge about Use synonyms
world
and can deal with any problem somehow, whereas chances are more that a young Suggestion
the world
age
guy will not handle a problem so well. Use synonyms
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family comes a big Suggestion
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responsibilty
of managing and carrying forward a healthy life. People get married at 18 start working for their family without having proper qualification end up in a low wage job and end up doing mundane activities for years.
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
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. Suggestion
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this
will give a pause in population boom. Suggestion
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a
person getting married at Suggestion
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age
of thirty will have maximum two kids to have a simple life. Use synonyms
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everyone Suggestion
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have
kids at Suggestion
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age
of 22 there will be no room for the growth of a child and the competition would be more. Use synonyms
as
every year 20000 students graduate from university which make job search hard and retirement is 65.
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next fifteen years
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the next fifteen years
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