People are encouraged to get rid of things in order to get newest fashion and the latest technology.Do the disadvantage of a throwaway society outweigh the economic advantages?

Advancement in technology takes people to move towards or vigour them to buy latest materials
,
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,
they avert to use old things and throw
on
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in
the land
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,
which cause
environment
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environmental
pollution
,
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,
so
unbalance cycle
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the unbalance cycle
of
environment
might occur.
This
essay is going to analyse
prons
in favor of (an action or proposal etc.)
pros
and cons effect of the use and throw culture. At the
outset discuss
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outset, discuss
on Positive side,
demend
request urgently and forcefully
demand
demands
of
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for
new
materals
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
materials
material
mothers
takes more production which
i's
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
grood
having desirable or positive qualities especially those suitable for a thing specified
good
for
emPloyees
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
employee
and
owener
(law) someone who owns (is legal possessor of) a business
owner
of
company
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the company
a company
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,
however
dwindling of unemployment ratio Should Found and more people
levenuging
investing with borrowed money as a way to amplify potential gains (at the risk of greater losses)
leveraging
to
eam
earn on some commercial or business transaction; earn as salary or wages
earn
money to compere their dreams. As the result of
this
,
economie
of or relating to an economy, the system of production and management of material wealth
economic
growth of country thrive,
More over
in addition
Moreover
, availability of new things People have
better choice
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better choices
a better choice
to show up growth
to
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of
the Society.
For instance
, few
decudes
a period of 10 years
decades
age, there was only Amul
milk
bag available in
marked but
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marked, but
thi's
denotes a person or thing
this
duys
a piece of dishware normally used as a container for holding or serving food
dish
, People
have
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has
Baroda dairy
milk
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,
sumul
limited or below average in number or quantity or magnitude or extent
small
milk
and so
mamy
a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number
many
more
Varities
a collection containing a variety of sorts of things
varieties
verities
variants
of
milk
available in
market
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the market
. On the negative side, use and throw
cultuae
Iaid many Problems in
environment
. A lot of plastic bags or rubbish created through the Public usage, which generate air and water pollution,
however
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however, this
this
Pollution harm people's health and
also
effecd
have an effect upon
affect
meek animals On he other hand by doing regular work,
employer
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the employer
feels Strees between family members might deteriorate
.
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.
further mere
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Further, mere
Further mere
Competition between
manufacturr
a business engaged in manufacturing some product
manufacturer
manufactured
manufactures
increase,
hence
crime
und
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
contradiction suddenly Peak at helm of affairs. In conclusion
,
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,
this
is
responsibility
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a responsibility
of societies to curb on the things
,
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,
which is harmful for
environment
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the environment
as well as their health.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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