People are encouraged to get rid of things in order to get newest fashion and the latest technology.Do the disadvantage of a throwaway society outweigh the economic advantages?

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Advancement in technology takes people to move towards or vigour them to buy latest materials

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they avert to use old things and throw

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the land

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which cause

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environment

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environmental

pollution

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unbalance cycle

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the unbalance cycle

environment

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might occur.

This

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essay is going to analyse

prons

in favor of (an action or proposal etc.)

pros

and cons effect of the use and throw culture. At the

outset discuss

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outset, discuss

on Positive side,

demend

request urgently and forcefully

demand

demands

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for

new

materals

the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object

materials

material

mothers

takes more production which

i's

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

grood

having desirable or positive qualities especially those suitable for a thing specified

good

for

emPloyees

a worker who is hired to perform a job

employees

employee

and

owener

(law) someone who owns (is legal possessor of) a business

owner

company

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the company

a company

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however

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dwindling of unemployment ratio Should Found and more people

levenuging

investing with borrowed money as a way to amplify potential gains (at the risk of greater losses)

leveraging

eam

earn on some commercial or business transaction; earn as salary or wages

earn

money to compere their dreams. As the result of

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economie

of or relating to an economy, the system of production and management of material wealth

economic

growth of country thrive,

More over

in addition

Moreover

, availability of new things People have

better choice

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better choices

a better choice

to show up growth

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the Society.

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, few

decudes

a period of 10 years

decades

age, there was only Amul

milk

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bag available in

marked but

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marked, but

thi's

denotes a person or thing

this

duys

a piece of dishware normally used as a container for holding or serving food

dish

, People

have

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has

Baroda dairy

milk

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sumul

limited or below average in number or quantity or magnitude or extent

small

milk

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and so

mamy

a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number

many

Varities

a collection containing a variety of sorts of things

varieties

verities

variants

milk

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available in

market

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the market

. On the negative side, use and throw

cultuae

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Iaid many Problems in

environment

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. A lot of plastic bags or rubbish created through the Public usage, which generate air and water pollution,

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however

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however, this

this

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Pollution harm people's health and

also

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effecd

have an effect upon

affect

meek animals On he other hand by doing regular work,

employer

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the employer

feels Strees between family members might deteriorate

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further mere

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Further, mere

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Competition between

manufacturr

a business engaged in manufacturing some product

manufacturer

manufactured

manufactures

increase,

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crime

und

in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go

and

contradiction suddenly Peak at helm of affairs. In conclusion

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this

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responsibility

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a responsibility

of societies to curb on the things

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which is harmful for

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environment

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the environment

as well as their health.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

244 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Throwaway society
Consumerism
Sustainability
Waste management
Economic growth
Innovation
Environmental degradation
Resource depletion
Materialism
Natural resources
Landfill
Carbon emissions
GDP growth
Manufacturing
Job creation
Ecosystems
Demand
Innovation
Economic activity
Municipalities

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People are encouraged to get rid of things in order to get newest fashion and the latest technology.Do the disadvantage of a throwaway society outweigh the economic advantages?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st century, and sea levels continue to rise at alarming rate. What problems are associated with this, and what are some possible solutions?

In many countries, a financial crime involving identity theft is increasing. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it identity theft has on the victims involved?

With all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other causes. To what extent do you agree with this view?