Some people think that the best way to reduce time spent in traveling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree.Discuss both views and give your own opinion .

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of the fast pace of life, commuters hope they could live near their

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a place where work is done

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d they support the idea that

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buildings should be built near the

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an area that is approximately central within some larger region

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ome people disagree with it because they think gardens and parks could create fresh air and create a relaxing atmosphere for tired people compare with crowded

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buildings .

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n my opinion ,

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insist that it is not a good idea that replacing parks and gardens with

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buildings near the

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s surely convenient for commuters They do not need to take subways or walk for a long

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and they could save a lot of

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or study .

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there are too many apartments near the

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eople will fall into the traffic jam and waste a lot of

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o it is not the best way to reduce

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f people replace parks and gardens with

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orkers will have no places to relax and the environment of the

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ill become worse .

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t is upset that some people who

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for a whole day want to have a walk and enjoy their leisure

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ompare with apartments ,

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arks and gardens have a more positive effect on the

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’s environment .

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In summary ,

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eplacing gardens and parks with apartments is not the best method to save people’s

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the act of going from one place to another

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idea may have a negative effect on harm the

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’s environment and causes traffic jam which may waste people more

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