Some people say that historical buildings should be knocked down while others say that they should be preserved. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Due to countries' development, human have different perspectives with whether keeping
acient
Suggestion
to keep
constr
belonging to times long past especially of the historical period before the fall of the Western Roman Empire
ancient
uctions or rebulid
ing modern
building again
rebuilding
skycrap
ers.
a very tall building with many stories
skyscrapers
skyscraper
However
, while many consider that its sho
uld
the thing named or in question
it
be kept for eductio
nal purpos
relating to the process of education
educational
e or travel landmarks, I personally believe that governe
mts outgh
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
government's
t
o dem
cause to be attached
attach
olish them
instead
of buidlin
g high-r
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
building
ise apartment.
Firstly
, the main purpose to protect acient
hertia
belonging to times long past especially of the historical period before the fall of the Western Roman Empire
ancient
g
e is tha
practices that are handed down from the past by tradition
heritage
t its still retain the possession of values for human history, which can be accessed to educate member of public.
For instance
, in western countries, some museums and castles have been almost renovated the inside of constructions and
then
exhibit some ancient tools, remarkable paintings or vivid scpltur
es adding
a three-dimensional work of plastic art
sculptures
descriptions in order to let children or tourists to comprehend historical stories and content or appreciate the beauty of the art. On the one hand, if governments organize these public hertiag
e proper
practices that are handed down from the past by tradition
heritage
ly, it can attract the number of foreign tourists to visit countries and doing so can help them to understand clearly about countries' culture.
On the other hand
, even though old contruc
tions have t
the act of constructing something
constructions
construction
heir value, there is no doubt that if too many derelict buildings still keep in cities, it is hard to have many difinit
e positi
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
ve impacts on countries' development and
this
can not
tackle
can not
cannot
the issue of over po
pulation. For a
too much population
overpopulation
n example of high po
pulating area, gover
Suggestion
a high populating area
the high populating area
nments should let construction firms have planning permission to run-down most of slums replacing them by high- rise apartment.
This
is because doing so is likely to help residents to live comfort
able and su
Suggestion
comfortably
pport homeless to have rooms to stay.
In addition
, it can reduce a risky b
ecaus
Suggestion
risk
e of unstabl
e structure that p
Suggestion
an unstable structure
unstable structures
eople who live in time- honored
buildi
having an illustrious reputation; respected
honoured
ngs suffer from natural
disaster,
Suggestion
natural disasters
a natural disaster
such
a
s
Accept space
,
earthqu
ake.
Suggestion
earthquakes
an earthquake
In conclusion,
although
for some historical buildings, its still have exist m
eanin
Suggestion
existed
gs, the concern of countries' progression and over- population issue, governments should take into account reorganizing those out- of-date buildings.
Therefore
, on balance, I believe we should buildings up many high- rise apartment
instead
of reminding historical buildings.
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  • Heritage conservation
  • Historical edifice
  • Cultural legacy
  • Architectural marvel
  • Preservationist
  • Urban landscape
  • Economic revitalization
  • Tourist hub
  • Adaptive reuse
  • Cultural fabric
  • Aesthetic appeal
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Civic identity
  • Preservation criteria
  • Structural integrity
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