Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, migration has become the major concern for many people world wide. More and more people tend to leave their home
country
, migrating to a foreign one due to political,
economical
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economic
or religious reasons, and many of them suffer to adapt to the new environment, but should they change their ways and methods in order to fit in
this
new society? In my opinion, I disagree up to a point because of the following reasons:
Firstly
, moving to another
country
should not erase your identity because you do not belong to
there
objective case of they
them
their
. You should always be proud of wherever you are and pick the things that fit your culture and beliefs from
this
new environment.
In other words
, you should accept some changes, but only those changes which you are sure they are 100% right,
for example
: respecting the law, being friendly and cooperative, etc...
In addition
, people who change their identity because of migrating to another
country
will not be respected by the people of their home.
Secondly
, it is very important to show the people of the
country
where you migrated the differences between your and their culture and that you will not replace your opinions because of changing the place where you live because
this
will make you feel like you are a
hipocrite
a person who professes beliefs and opinions that he or she does not hold in order to conceal his or her real feelings or motives
hypocrite
. There is a possibility that people will accept the difference and will help you to adapt
with
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to
the new atmosphere. So if you changed your ways, it would be like you left them for no reason. In my opinion, It is better to strive a little to save your culture. Summing up, many people face the choice of migration those days and tend to take it, but I believe if they did,
this
should not make them erase their identity or change their ways.
Also
, you should only be brave enough to show the difference and people may accept it easily.
Finally
, saving your ideas and being proud of your
country
, will make you more respected and provide you with confidence and inner peace
as a result
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • migration
  • integration
  • social cohesion
  • cultural clashes
  • original culture
  • diversity
  • identity loss
  • psychological distress
  • balanced approach
  • local customs
  • cultural identities
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