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You need to take leave from your work of over one month of a period for personal reasons. Write a letter to your boss. In your letter · Explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need · Explain how you will keep up-to-date while you’re away · Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request permission to take one month leave from work as I broke my right leg in a roadside accident two days ago. In fact, the doctors have suggested me a bed rest so that the bones can join appropriately. I know that the work never stops, so I ensure you
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remain engaged while away from work. I am grateful that I shall regularly perform my tasks at
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 to students’ queries and uploading voice-over lectures.
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, I understand that my absence would be a loss for students’ studies,
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, I could prevent it by taking make-up classes after rejoining my duty. The other thing I could manage is to develop a test schedule for the leave period so that students can revise the already learnt lessons. I look forward to hearing from you soon and thank you in advance for your consideration
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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