Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want.Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women.

There is an
undenibale
not possible to deny
undeniable
fact that gender equality is supported by many people and ladies and
gentelmen
a man of refinement
gentlemen
gentleman
are deemed equal in every field of life
,
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while, others believe that men and women are not equal and for that reason, there can be several appropriate jobs for woman.As I am feminist, in my estimate, women's and men's rights are equal
However
, they have some mental as well as physical differences between them.
Therefore there
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Therefore, there
are certain jobs which are not suitable for ladies or men.
To begin
with, Men are much stronger in
comprasion
an increase in the density of something
compression
comparison
with women and some jobs demand physical strength.
according
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According
to a survey conducted by The London University that women are not favoured for some
occuptions
the principal activity in your life that you do to earn money
occupations
exceptions
occupation
such
as
;
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;
engineer, master
,
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,
or plumber.
In addition
to
this
, some researchers have shown that if women do some work that requires physical activities they can damage their
healt
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
.
Secondly
, some
proffesions
the body of people in a learned occupation
professions
provisions
professionals
are related to psychology. According to some famous scientists' opinions
,
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,
women are better to control their emotion compared to males.They are
also
more successful to understand or
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
people and have a
gopd
having desirable or positive qualities especially those suitable for a thing specified
good
memory.
In other words
, Females are more appropriate some
proffesions
the body of people in a learned occupation
professions
professionals
provisions
such
as; teachers, social work
,
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,
examiner
,
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interviewer, and so on. And men are not more favoured for these
occuptions
the principal activity in your life that you do to earn money
occupations
exceptions
. In conclusion, taking all discussed factors into
consideration I
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consideration, I
would have to acknowledge that males and females are equal in general.Yet they have some differences And they should be
choosed not
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chosen, not
chosen not
chose not
chased not
closed not
because of their
sex but
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sex, but
because of their abilities Both
ot
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
them are able to become
succesfull
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
in certain fields which are suitable
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