Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want.Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women.

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There is an

undenibale

not possible to deny

undeniable

fact that gender equality is supported by many people and ladies and

gentelmen

a man of refinement

gentlemen

gentleman

are deemed equal in every field of life

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while, others believe that men and women are not equal and for that reason, there can be several appropriate jobs for woman.As I am feminist, in my estimate, women's and men's rights are equal

However

, they have some mental as well as physical differences between them.

Therefore there

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Therefore, there

are certain jobs which are not suitable for ladies or men.

To begin

with, Men are much stronger in

comprasion

an increase in the density of something

compression

comparison

with women and some jobs demand physical strength.

according

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According

to a survey conducted by The London University that women are not favoured for some

occuptions

the principal activity in your life that you do to earn money

occupations

exceptions

occupation

such

;

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;

engineer, master

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or plumber.

In addition

this

, some researchers have shown that if women do some work that requires physical activities they can damage their

healt

a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease

health

Secondly

, some

proffesions

the body of people in a learned occupation

professions

provisions

professionals

are related to psychology. According to some famous scientists' opinions

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women are better to control their emotion compared to males.They are

also

more successful to understand or

analyze

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analyse

people and have a

gopd

having desirable or positive qualities especially those suitable for a thing specified

good

memory.

In other words

, Females are more appropriate some

proffesions

the body of people in a learned occupation

professions

professionals

provisions

such

as; teachers, social work

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examiner

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interviewer, and so on. And men are not more favoured for these

occuptions

the principal activity in your life that you do to earn money

occupations

exceptions

. In conclusion, taking all discussed factors into

consideration I

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consideration, I

would have to acknowledge that males and females are equal in general.Yet they have some differences And they should be

choosed not

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chosen, not

chosen not

chose not

chased not

closed not

because of their

sex but

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sex, but

because of their abilities Both

connects a noun with the preceding word

them are able to become

succesfull

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

in certain fields which are suitable

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Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want.Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women.

Your opinion

the process of Pu-erh Raw tea and Ripe tea. make a summary regarding the given diagram

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