Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want.Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women.

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There is an

undenibale

not possible to deny

undeniable

fact that gender equality is supported by many people and ladies and

gentelmen

a man of refinement

gentlemen

gentleman

are deemed equal in every field of life

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while, others believe that men and women are not equal and for that reason, there can be several appropriate jobs for woman.As I am feminist, in my estimate, women's and men's rights are equal

However

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, they have some mental as well as physical differences between them.

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Therefore there

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Therefore, there

are certain jobs which are not suitable for ladies or men.

To begin

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with, Men are much stronger in

comprasion

an increase in the density of something

compression

comparison

with women and some jobs demand physical strength.

according

Suggestion

According

to a survey conducted by The London University that women are not favoured for some

occuptions

the principal activity in your life that you do to earn money

occupations

exceptions

occupation

such

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;

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;

engineer, master

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or plumber.

In addition

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this

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, some researchers have shown that if women do some work that requires physical activities they can damage their

healt

a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease

health

Secondly

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, some

proffesions

the body of people in a learned occupation

professions

provisions

professionals

are related to psychology. According to some famous scientists' opinions

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women are better to control their emotion compared to males.They are

also

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more successful to understand or

analyze

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analyse

people and have a

gopd

having desirable or positive qualities especially those suitable for a thing specified

good

memory.

In other words

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, Females are more appropriate some

proffesions

the body of people in a learned occupation

professions

professionals

provisions

such

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as; teachers, social work

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examiner

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interviewer, and so on. And men are not more favoured for these

occuptions

the principal activity in your life that you do to earn money

occupations

exceptions

. In conclusion, taking all discussed factors into

consideration I

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consideration, I

would have to acknowledge that males and females are equal in general.Yet they have some differences And they should be

choosed not

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chosen, not

chosen not

chose not

chased not

closed not

because of their

sex but

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sex, but

because of their abilities Both

connects a noun with the preceding word

them are able to become

succesfull

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

in certain fields which are suitable

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

259 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

gender equality
workforce
diversity
business outcomes
female leaders
perceptions
gender roles
societal norms
stereotypes
human potential
job suitability
physical attributes
skills
qualifications
passion
male-dominated fields
engineering
military
leadership roles
breaking down stereotypes
encouraging diversity

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Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want.Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women.

Your opinion

The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

some people feel that free time is something valuable.