Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measure do you think might be effective?

As the use of cars is on the

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rise, there

is a suggestion that inflating the

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of

petrol

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may be the best

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resolution

to the problem of increasing

traffic

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and environmental pollution. I completely disagree with

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suggestion.

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essay will

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explain why I disagree and

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suggest a possible alternative

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. Hiking the

price

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of

petrol

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will raise

financial burden

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the financial burden

of the masses.

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is because people depend on cars as a means of moving from one point to another quickly and more efficiently.

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Therefore, increasing

the

price

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of

petrol

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will cause them to spend more money on transportation without necessarily declining the use of cars.

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, a more feasible

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to

traffic

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congestion would be building more access ways. Creating more road network would result in

effective decrease

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an effective decrease

in

traffic

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jams experienced on the roads especially during morning rush hours. Another

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to pollution issues would be promoting and subsidizing cars that run on electricity. These

type

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types

of cars emit minimal harmful gases as they

not burn

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don't burn

fossil fuel. In conclusion, raising the

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of

petrol

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for the purpose of preventing

traffic

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and pollution problems, in my opinion will only increase

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spending, but

more roads and alternative car engines might bring a more enduring

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.