Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples.

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The climate
Climate
is
very important thing
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a very important thing
for our
environment
,
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,
humans being
,
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,
animals and plants.Everything on the earth are related
with
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to
environment
and
environment
is related
with
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to
climate
.If we keep our
climate
nit and
clean
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clean, then
then
we can get a clean and
higenic
tending to promote or preserve health
hygienic
environment
.
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from
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From
the passage I see there are two categories people who have different opinion about keep
environment
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the environment
clean.One
catagories
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category
categories
people say humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources
,
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,
such
as wind and solar power.I agree with them though we cannot do
this
properly
,
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,
but if we take a strong step to prevent all of dangerous and
hagerdous
involving risk or danger
hazardous
products and elements which is not
ecofriendly
then
we can keep our
environment
clean slowly.
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Other
catagories
place into or assign to a category
categorise
people think that oil
,
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gas and coal are essential for many industries
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and not using them will lead to economic
collapse but
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collapse, but
they have no idea that if we regularly use them in the industries
for
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to
increase our economic system after some decades later we see our
environment
lose its all natural beauty and our
environment
turn into
dessart
leave someone who needs or counts on you; leave in the lurch
desert
deserts
.
last
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Last
of all, I would like to say we should use the
ecofriendly
items and products for keeping
environment
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the environment
clean and we should avoid those
unhigenic
products which is not
ecofreindly
.
Then
we can protect our
environment
and
climate
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mitigate
  • renewable energy sources
  • economic collapse
  • fossil fuels
  • solar power
  • wind energy
  • alternative resources
  • clean energy
  • technological advancements
  • government subsidies
  • energy transition
  • reliability
  • job creation
  • economic benefits
  • global warming
  • carbon footprint
  • sustainability
  • innovation
  • infrastructure
  • regulatory framework
  • energy efficiency
  • climate resilience
  • decarbonization
  • socioeconomic impact
  • energy security
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