If a product is sold and people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with this?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

An announcement intended to inform people about a specific

product

Use synonyms

, service or employment opportunity is known as advertisement. Advertisements play an important role in achieving the sales target of any

product

Use synonyms

Thus

Linking Words

, I strongly agreed that advertisements are necessary to aware customers about the pros and cons of any

product

Use synonyms

or service. (52) We had seen in the past that people buy all the products and services directly from markets or institutions. There was no concept of advertisements in many parts of the world until the invention of information technology in

19th century

Suggestion

the 19th century

. (40) Presently, the trend of advertisement is spreading all over the world. Nowadays, advertisements are necessary in order to attract the attention of customers towards new products and services.

For example

Linking Words

, all the mobile companies used massive advertisements to motivate consumers towards new models of cell phone with latest features.

Similarly

Linking Words

, in

garments industry

Suggestion

the garment industry

garment industry

, advertisements not only inform people about the new design and latest

fashion but

Accept comma addition

fashion, but

also

Linking Words

play a major role in attaining their

sale

Suggestion

sales

targets. (76) The recent development in Science and information technology has enabled the people to buy any

product

Use synonyms

online over the internet. All the international brands have advertised their products online in order to facilitate the people.

Thus

Linking Words

, if the people keep on buying advertised products,

then

Linking Words

it will surely become a compulsory element in the sale of any

product

Use synonyms

in near future. (61)

Thus

Linking Words

, I strongly believed that advertisements are a great source of getting

consumers

Suggestion

consumers'

consumer's

attention and to achieve sales targets of any

product

Use synonyms

even if the

product

Use synonyms

is sold and people buy it. (32)

Submitted by mamir.amirshahzad on Mon Jan 13 2020

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

266 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

inform
educate
brand awareness
capture attention
competitive market
influence consumer behavior
purchasing decisions
positive association
enhance appeal
product differentiation
innovation
customers' awareness

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

<4
band
The most importan aim of science is to should be to improve people's life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this estatement
In the era of globalization, the scince has been involved in many sectors. Nevetheless, a wide range of individuals assuming that the necessary of sciebce is to ameliorate peoples life. I strongly agree with this argument. In this essay, I will elaborate on my point of view.
6.5
band
You see an advertisement for a product. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Tell your friend where you saw the advertisement Describe the product Explain why your friend should buy this product.
I hope this letter finds you well. I am incredibly sorry not to have been in touch recently. Life has been a little bit hectic. I am writing this letter to recommend a blender for you.
7
band
Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Communication is the standard method for two parties to exchange information. The methods are commonly applied in two forms: orally and in written form. Both styles have their own strengths and weaknesses. The prompt suggests that the spoken method is stronger than the written form. This essay will provide several statements to emphasise that suggestion.
<4
band
Studies have shown that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison, so that they can get a job when they leave. Do you agree or disagree?
Recently, many researchers prove that most criminals are uncultured as they have lack of opportunities on education. Some people think that prison is the suitable place for educating criminals, and also give them decent jobs when get realeased. To be honest, I would definately say that I have the same point view with this.
5.5
band
Some people say that what individuals do to protect cannot make difference others say that individuals can protect the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A highly subjective debate is that the participation of individuals in protecting the world is whether or not influential. The author is of the opinion that anyone can immerse themselves in improving the environment’s status through technological support and cooperation despite being opposed by the propaganda that individuals could not participate in this field because of low authority.

If a product is sold and people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with this?

Fully explain your ideas

The most importan aim of science is to should be to improve people's life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this estatement

You see an advertisement for a product. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Tell your friend where you saw the advertisement Describe the product Explain why your friend should buy this product.

Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Studies have shown that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison, so that they can get a job when they leave. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that what individuals do to protect cannot make difference others say that individuals can protect the environment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.