If a product is sold and people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with this?

An announcement intended to inform people about a specific
product
, service or employment opportunity is known as advertisement. Advertisements play an important role in achieving the sales target of any
product
.
Thus
, I strongly agreed that advertisements are necessary to aware customers about the pros and cons of any
product
or service. (52) We had seen in the past that people buy all the products and services directly from markets or institutions. There was no concept of advertisements in many parts of the world until the invention of information technology in
19th century
Suggestion
the 19th century
. (40) Presently, the trend of advertisement is spreading all over the world. Nowadays, advertisements are necessary in order to attract the attention of customers towards new products and services.
For example
, all the mobile companies used massive advertisements to motivate consumers towards new models of cell phone with latest features.
Similarly
, in
garments industry
Suggestion
the garment industry
garment industry
, advertisements not only inform people about the new design and latest
fashion but
Accept comma addition
fashion, but
also
play a major role in attaining their
sale
Suggestion
sales
targets. (76) The recent development in Science and information technology has enabled the people to buy any
product
online over the internet. All the international brands have advertised their products online in order to facilitate the people.
Thus
, if the people keep on buying advertised products,
then
it will surely become a compulsory element in the sale of any
product
in near future. (61)
Thus
, I strongly believed that advertisements are a great source of getting
consumers
Suggestion
consumers'
consumer's
attention and to achieve sales targets of any
product
even if the
product
is sold and people buy it. (32)
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