Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem.

Despite suffering the punishment, crime rates increase even more in the criminals.

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essay will examine the causes of rising criminal activities, and possible solutions of

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problem. The two main causes of

commiting

perform an act, usually with a negative connotation

committing

crime by ex-prisoners

are unemployment, and

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, and unemployment are

making peace with imprisonment. The majority of people are usually unable to land on a job with

decent salary

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a decent salary

after serving the punishment. Because, neither employers find them trustworthy, nor are they willing to take the risk of exploiting their company's name.

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, offenders who are subjected to long terms of imprisonment end up feeling like at home in the jail.

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, even if, they are released on term, yet criminals usually find the outside world

unaccepting

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. In the historical movie, 'The Shawshank Redemption', a man who is free after spending fifty years of his life in the prison, is unable to adjust in the normal

environemnt

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

. While, he was regarded with respect in the prison as he worked as a librarian in there, working in the supermarket without the known faces makes him feel miserable and unworthy. Because of that, he commits suicide.

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, unable to

ind

come upon, as if by accident; meet with

find

end

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a respectable job and status, sometimes, result in going back to the same wrong route. The two possible solutions to

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problem are

teaching

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taught

skills to the criminals and educating them against their convictions.

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, a person could be taught some skills for menial jobs that may help them in finding a suitable occupation to earn daily wages.

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, since, there is lots of time to kill in the prison, educating the offenders about their convicted felony, and

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

impact on the person and the society might be useful.

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way, the person might actually feel guilty, and stop himself from choosing the harmful way in the future.

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, these little efforts, rather than, physical and mental torture behind the bars, can possibly prevent

further

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rise in crimes. In conclusion,

dificulty

an effort that is inconvenient

difficulty

in finding a decent salary and a respectable position in society after serving the

first

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punishment are

few

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a few

of the many causes of

risin

advancing or becoming higher or greater in degree or value or status

rising

recent

criminal activity.

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, teaching the

criminals some

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criminals, some

useful and reliable skills, and realization of their mistake

are

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is

the possible solutions.