Some people think that work is the most important thing of people’s life. Without the success of career, life becomes meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
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one
of the most significant things among other aspects of human life
, leading to wrong perception
that life
becomes meaningless if success
could not be obtained. From my own perspective
, I just advocate
some extents of the given statement
.
To begin
with, there is a wide range
of reasons that work
is important for one
’s life
. First
, success
in work
brings about the sense
of achievement
accomplishment
. The plain truth
is that people usually feel more happy and satisfied if they are recognised and this
can be gained only when they are working. In
addition
, work
is crucial since it helps people to make ends meet. As both
lucrative and low-paid work
have
to Suggestion
has
work
to meet basic living requirements or even be affordable to purchase
what they planned to have. For
instance
, a recent research
showed that 80 percent
of family divorced due to their difficult financial situations, leading to poor life
quality
and unhappy. Therefore
, work
plays an important role
in one
’s life
.
On the other
hand
, there are more desirable goals rather than a successful life
to attain in our life
. A vast majority
of people perceive a meaningful life
as having their families and close friends. The plain truth
is that relationships with our family and friends are actually keep
us going and happy even we are Suggestion
keeping
failed
or Suggestion
failing
stucked
in caught or fixed
stuck
job
. Suggestion
a job
Moreover
, health
is another worth-mentioning factor
. In fact
, if people have a good health
or best immune
Suggestion
the best immune system
system
, their life
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
time
is likely to be filled with human well-being. By
contrast
, a successful person
with a cancer
or a fatal disease
might have the negative outlook
in their lives as they have no time
.
As aforementioned explanations, while it is true that success
makes life
more wonderful, truly important thingsin
Suggestion
things in
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
as health
and relationships are actually vital which success
cannot bring about.Work
is believed to be one
of the most significant things among other aspects of human life
, leading to wrong perception
that life
becomes meaningless if success
could not be obtained. From my own perspective
, I just advocate
some extents of the given statement
.
To begin
with, there is a wide range
of reasons that workk
is important for activity directed toward making or doing something
work
one
’s life
. First
, success
in work
brings about the sense
of achievement
accomplishment
. The plain truth
is that people usually feel more happy and satisfied if they are recognised and this
can be gained only when they are working. In
addition
, work
is crucial since it helps people to make ends meet. As both
lucrative and low-paid work
have
to Suggestion
has
work
to meet basic living requirements or even be affordable to purchase
what they planned to have. For
instance
, a recent research
showed that 80 percent
of family divorced due to their difficult financial situations, leading to poor life
quality
and unhappy. Therefore
, work
plays an important role
in one
’s life
.
On the other
hand
, there are more desirable goals rather than a successful life
to attain in our life
. A vast majority
of people perceive a meaningful life
as having their families and close friends. The plain truth
is that relationships with our family and friends are actually keep
us going and happy even we are Suggestion
keeping
failed
or Suggestion
failing
stucked
in caught or fixed
stuck
job
. Suggestion
a job
Moreover
, health
is another worth-mentioning factor
. In fact
, if people have a good health
or best immune
Suggestion
the best immune system
system
, their life
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
time
is likely to be filled with human well-being. By
contrast
, a successful person
with a cancer
or a fatal disease
might have the negative outlook
in their lives as they have no time
.
As aforementioned explanations, while it is true that success
makes life
more wonderful, truly important thingsin
Suggestion
things in
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
as health
and relationships are actually vital which success
cannot bring about.Work
is believed to be one
of the most significant things among other aspects of human life
, leading to wrong perception
that life
becomes meaningless if success
could not be obtained. From my own perspective
, I just advocate
some extents of the given statement
.
To begin
with, there is a wide range
of reasons that work
is important for one
’s life
. First
, success
in workk
brings about the activity directed toward making or doing something
work
sense
of achievement
accomplishment
. The plain truth
is that people usually feel more happy and satisfied if they are recognised and this
can be gained only when they are working. In
addition
, work
is crucial since it helps people to make ends meet. As both
lucrative and low-paid work
have
to Suggestion
has
work
to meet basic living requirements or even be affordable to purchase
what they planned to have. For
instance
, a recent research
showed that 80 percent
of family divorced due to their difficult financial situations, leading to poor life
quality
and unhappy. Therefore
, work
plays an important role
in one
’s life
.
On the other
hand
, there are more desirable goals rather than a successful life
to attain in our life
. A vast majority
of people perceive a meaningful life
as having their families and close friends. The plain truth
is that relationships with our family and friends are actually keep
us going and happy even we are Suggestion
keeping
failed
or Suggestion
failing
stucked
in caught or fixed
stuck
job
. Suggestion
a job
Moreover
, health
is another worth-mentioning factor
. In fact
, if people have a good health
or best immune
Suggestion
the best immune system
system
, their life
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
time
is likely to be filled with human well-being. By
contrast
, a successful person
with a cancer
or a fatal disease
might have the negative outlook
in their lives as they have no time
.
As aforementioned explanations, while it is true that success
makes life
more wonderful, truly important thingsin
Suggestion
things in
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
as health
and relationships are actually vital which success
cannot bring about.Work
is believed to be one
of the most significant things among other aspects of human life
, leading to wrong perception
that life
becomes meaningless if success
could not be obtained. From my own perspective
, I just advocate
some extents of the given statement
.
To begin
with, there is a wide range
of reasons that work
is important for one
’s life
. First
, success
in work
brings about the sense
of achievement
accomplishment
. The plain truth
is that people usually feel more happy and satisfied if they are recognised and this
can be gained only when they are working. In
addition
, workk
is crucial since it helps people to make ends meet. As activity directed toward making or doing something
work
works
both
lucrative and low-paid work
have
to Suggestion
has
work
to meet basic living requirements or even be affordable to purchase
what they planned to have. For
instance
, a recent research
showed that 80 percent
of family divorced due to their difficult financial situations, leading to poor life
quality
and unhappy. Therefore
, work
plays an important role
in one
’s life
.
On the other
hand
, there are more desirable goals rather than a successful life
to attain in our life
. A vast majority
of people perceive a meaningful life
as having their families and close friends. The plain truth
is that relationships with our family and friends are actually keep
us going and happy even we are Suggestion
keeping
failed
or Suggestion
failing
stucked
in caught or fixed
stuck
job
. Suggestion
a job
Moreover
, health
is another worth-mentioning factor
. In fact
, if people have a good health
or best immune
Suggestion
the best immune system
system
, their life
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
time
is likely to be filled with human well-being. By
contrast
, a successful person
with a cancer
or a fatal disease
might have the negative outlook
in their lives as they have no time
.
As aforementioned explanations, while it is true that success
makes life
more wonderful, truly important thingsin
Suggestion
things in
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
as health
and relationships are actually vital which success
cannot bring about.Work
is believed to be one
of the most significant things among other aspects of human life
, leading to wrong perception
that life
becomes meaningless if success
could not be obtained. From my own perspective
, I just advocate
some extents of the given statement
.
To begin
with, there is a wide range
of reasons that work
is important for one
’s life
. First
, success
in work
brings about the sense
of achievement
accomplishment
. The plain truth
is that people usually feel more happy and satisfied if they are recognised and this
can be gained only when they are working. In
addition
, work
is crucial since it helps people to make ends meet. As both
lucrative and low-paid workk
activity directed toward making or doing something
work
have
to Suggestion
has
work
to meet basic living requirements or even be affordable to purchase
what they planned to have. For
instance
, a recent research
showed that 80 percent
of family divorced due to their difficult financial situations, leading to poor life
quality
and unhappy. Therefore
, work
plays an important role
in one
’s life
.
On the other
hand
, there are more desirable goals rather than a successful life
to attain in our life
. A vast majority
of people perceive a meaningful life
as having their families and close friends. The plain truth
is that relationships with our family and friends are actually keep
us going and happy even we are Suggestion
keeping
failed
or Suggestion
failing
stucked
in caught or fixed
stuck
job
. Suggestion
a job
Moreover
, health
is another worth-mentioning factor
. In fact
, if people have a good health
or best immune
Suggestion
the best immune system
system
, their life
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
time
is likely to be filled with human well-being. By
contrast
, a successful person
with a cancer
or a fatal disease
might have the negative outlook
in their lives as they have no time
.
As aforementioned explanations, while it is true that success
makes life
more wonderful, truly important thingsin
Suggestion
things in
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
as health
and relationships are actually vital which success
cannot bring about.Work
is believed to be one
of the most significant things among other aspects of human life
, leading to wrong perception
that life
becomes meaningless if success
could not be obtained. From my own perspective
, I just advocate
some extents of the given statement
.
To begin
with, there is a wide range
of reasons that work
is important for one
’s life
. First
, success
in work
brings about the sense
of achievement
accomplishment
. The plain truth
is that people usually feel more happy and satisfied if they are recognised and this
can be gained only when they are working. In
addition
, work
is crucial since it helps people to make ends meet. As both
lucrative and low-paid work
have
to Suggestion
has
workk
to meet basic living requirements or even be affordable to activity directed toward making or doing something
work
purchase
what they planned to have. For
instance
, a recent research
showed that 80 percent
of family divorced due to their difficult financial situations, leading to poor life
quality
and unhappy. Therefore
, work
plays an important role
in one
’s life
.
On the other
hand
, there are more desirable goals rather than a successful life
to attain in our life
. A vast majority
of people perceive a meaningful life
as having their families and close friends. The plain truth
is that relationships with our family and friends are actually keep
us going and happy even we are Suggestion
keeping
failed
or Suggestion
failing
stucked
in caught or fixed
stuck
job
. Suggestion
a job
Moreover
, health
is another worth-mentioning factor
. In fact
, if people have a good health
or best immune
Suggestion
the best immune system
system
, their life
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
time
is likely to be filled with human well-being. By
contrast
, a successful person
with a cancer
or a fatal disease
might have the negative outlook
in their lives as they have no time
.
As aforementioned explanations, while it is true that success
makes life
more wonderful, truly important thingsin
Suggestion
things in
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
as health
and relationships are actually vital which success
cannot bring about.Work
is believed to be one
of the most significant things among other aspects of human life
, leading to wrong perception
that life
becomes meaningless if success
could not be obtained. From my own perspective
, I just advocate
some extents of the given statement
.
To begin
with, there is a wide range
of reasons that work
is important for one
’s life
. First
, success
in work
brings about the sense
of achievement
accomplishment
. The plain truth
is that people usually feel more happy and satisfied if they are recognised and this
can be gained only when they are working. In
addition
, work
is crucial since it helps people to make ends meet. As both
lucrative and low-paid work
have
to Suggestion
has
work
to meet basic living requirements or even be affordable to purchase
what they planned to have. For
instance
, a recent research
showed that 80 percent
of family divorced due to their difficult financial situations, leading to poor life
quality
and unhappy. Therefore
, workk
plays an important activity directed toward making or doing something
work
role
in one
’s life
.
On the other
hand
, there are more desirable goals rather than a successful life
to attain in our life
. A vast majority
of people perceive a meaningful life
as having their families and close friends. The plain truth
is that relationships with our family and friends are actually keep
us going and happy even we are Suggestion
keeping
failed
or Suggestion
failing
stucked
in caught or fixed
stuck
job
. Suggestion
a job
Moreover
, health
is another worth-mentioning factor
. In fact
, if people have a good health
or best immune
Suggestion
the best immune system
system
, their life
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
time
is likely to be filled with human well-being. By
contrast
, a successful person
with a cancer
or a fatal disease
might have the negative outlook
in their lives as they have no time
.
As aforementioned explanations, while it is true that success
makes life
more wonderful, truly important thingsin
Suggestion
things in
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
as health
and relationships are actually vital which success
cannot bring about.Submitted by quochuypro.9a1 on
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Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
- Summary
- Restatement of thesis
- Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
- In conclusion
- To conclude
- To summarize
- Finally
- In a nutshell
- In general