Some people think that work is the most important thing of people’s life. Without the success of career, life becomes meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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York
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is believed to be
one
of the most significant things among other aspects of human
life
, leading to wrong
perception
that
life
becomes meaningless if
success
could not be obtained. From my own
perspective
, I just
advocate
some extents of the given
statement
.
To begin
with, there is a wide
range
of reasons that
work
is important for
one
’s
life
.
First
,
success
in
work
brings about the
sense
of
achievement
accomplishment
. The plain
truth
is that people usually feel more happy and satisfied if they are recognised and
this
can be gained only when they are working.
In
addition
,
work
is crucial since it helps people to make ends meet. As
both
lucrative and low-paid
work
have
Suggestion
has
to
work
to meet basic living requirements or even be affordable to
purchase
what they planned to have.
For
instance
, a recent
research
showed that 80
percent
of family divorced due to their difficult financial situations, leading to poor
life
quality
and unhappy.
Therefore
,
work
plays an important
role
in
one
’s
life
.
On the other
hand
, there are more desirable goals rather than a successful
life
to attain in our
life
. A vast
majority
of people perceive a meaningful
life
as having their families and close friends. The plain
truth
is that relationships with our family and friends are actually
keep
Suggestion
keeping
us going and happy even we are
failed
Suggestion
failing
or
stucked
caught or fixed
stuck
in
job
Suggestion
a job
.
Moreover
,
health
is another worth-mentioning
factor
. In
fact
, if people have a good
health
or
best immune
Suggestion
the best immune system
system
, their
life
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
time
is likely to be filled with human well-being.
By
contrast
, a successful
person
with a
cancer
or a fatal
disease
might have the negative
outlook
in their lives as they have no
time
. As aforementioned explanations, while it is true that
success
makes
life
more wonderful, truly important
thingsin
Suggestion
things in
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
as
health
and relationships are actually vital which
success
cannot bring about.
Work
is believed to be
one
of the most significant things among other aspects of human
life
, leading to wrong
perception
that
life
becomes meaningless if
success
could not be obtained. From my own
perspective
, I just
advocate
some extents of the given
statement
.
To begin
with, there is a wide
range
of reasons that
workk
activity directed toward making or doing something
work
is important for
one
’s
life
.
First
,
success
in
work
brings about the
sense
of
achievement
accomplishment
. The plain
truth
is that people usually feel more happy and satisfied if they are recognised and
this
can be gained only when they are working.
In
addition
,
work
is crucial since it helps people to make ends meet. As
both
lucrative and low-paid
work
have
Suggestion
has
to
work
to meet basic living requirements or even be affordable to
purchase
what they planned to have.
For
instance
, a recent
research
showed that 80
percent
of family divorced due to their difficult financial situations, leading to poor
life
quality
and unhappy.
Therefore
,
work
plays an important
role
in
one
’s
life
.
On the other
hand
, there are more desirable goals rather than a successful
life
to attain in our
life
. A vast
majority
of people perceive a meaningful
life
as having their families and close friends. The plain
truth
is that relationships with our family and friends are actually
keep
Suggestion
keeping
us going and happy even we are
failed
Suggestion
failing
or
stucked
caught or fixed
stuck
in
job
Suggestion
a job
.
Moreover
,
health
is another worth-mentioning
factor
. In
fact
, if people have a good
health
or
best immune
Suggestion
the best immune system
system
, their
life
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
time
is likely to be filled with human well-being.
By
contrast
, a successful
person
with a
cancer
or a fatal
disease
might have the negative
outlook
in their lives as they have no
time
. As aforementioned explanations, while it is true that
success
makes
life
more wonderful, truly important
thingsin
Suggestion
things in
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
as
health
and relationships are actually vital which
success
cannot bring about.
Work
is believed to be
one
of the most significant things among other aspects of human
life
, leading to wrong
perception
that
life
becomes meaningless if
success
could not be obtained. From my own
perspective
, I just
advocate
some extents of the given
statement
.
To begin
with, there is a wide
range
of reasons that
work
is important for
one
’s
life
.
First
,
success
in
workk
activity directed toward making or doing something
work
brings about the
sense
of
achievement
accomplishment
. The plain
truth
is that people usually feel more happy and satisfied if they are recognised and
this
can be gained only when they are working.
In
addition
,
work
is crucial since it helps people to make ends meet. As
both
lucrative and low-paid
work
have
Suggestion
has
to
work
to meet basic living requirements or even be affordable to
purchase
what they planned to have.
For
instance
, a recent
research
showed that 80
percent
of family divorced due to their difficult financial situations, leading to poor
life
quality
and unhappy.
Therefore
,
work
plays an important
role
in
one
’s
life
.
On the other
hand
, there are more desirable goals rather than a successful
life
to attain in our
life
. A vast
majority
of people perceive a meaningful
life
as having their families and close friends. The plain
truth
is that relationships with our family and friends are actually
keep
Suggestion
keeping
us going and happy even we are
failed
Suggestion
failing
or
stucked
caught or fixed
stuck
in
job
Suggestion
a job
.
Moreover
,
health
is another worth-mentioning
factor
. In
fact
, if people have a good
health
or
best immune
Suggestion
the best immune system
system
, their
life
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
time
is likely to be filled with human well-being.
By
contrast
, a successful
person
with a
cancer
or a fatal
disease
might have the negative
outlook
in their lives as they have no
time
. As aforementioned explanations, while it is true that
success
makes
life
more wonderful, truly important
thingsin
Suggestion
things in
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
as
health
and relationships are actually vital which
success
cannot bring about.
Work
is believed to be
one
of the most significant things among other aspects of human
life
, leading to wrong
perception
that
life
becomes meaningless if
success
could not be obtained. From my own
perspective
, I just
advocate
some extents of the given
statement
.
To begin
with, there is a wide
range
of reasons that
work
is important for
one
’s
life
.
First
,
success
in
work
brings about the
sense
of
achievement
accomplishment
. The plain
truth
is that people usually feel more happy and satisfied if they are recognised and
this
can be gained only when they are working.
In
addition
,
workk
activity directed toward making or doing something
work
works
is crucial since it helps people to make ends meet. As
both
lucrative and low-paid
work
have
Suggestion
has
to
work
to meet basic living requirements or even be affordable to
purchase
what they planned to have.
For
instance
, a recent
research
showed that 80
percent
of family divorced due to their difficult financial situations, leading to poor
life
quality
and unhappy.
Therefore
,
work
plays an important
role
in
one
’s
life
.
On the other
hand
, there are more desirable goals rather than a successful
life
to attain in our
life
. A vast
majority
of people perceive a meaningful
life
as having their families and close friends. The plain
truth
is that relationships with our family and friends are actually
keep
Suggestion
keeping
us going and happy even we are
failed
Suggestion
failing
or
stucked
caught or fixed
stuck
in
job
Suggestion
a job
.
Moreover
,
health
is another worth-mentioning
factor
. In
fact
, if people have a good
health
or
best immune
Suggestion
the best immune system
system
, their
life
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
time
is likely to be filled with human well-being.
By
contrast
, a successful
person
with a
cancer
or a fatal
disease
might have the negative
outlook
in their lives as they have no
time
. As aforementioned explanations, while it is true that
success
makes
life
more wonderful, truly important
thingsin
Suggestion
things in
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
as
health
and relationships are actually vital which
success
cannot bring about.
Work
is believed to be
one
of the most significant things among other aspects of human
life
, leading to wrong
perception
that
life
becomes meaningless if
success
could not be obtained. From my own
perspective
, I just
advocate
some extents of the given
statement
.
To begin
with, there is a wide
range
of reasons that
work
is important for
one
’s
life
.
First
,
success
in
work
brings about the
sense
of
achievement
accomplishment
. The plain
truth
is that people usually feel more happy and satisfied if they are recognised and
this
can be gained only when they are working.
In
addition
,
work
is crucial since it helps people to make ends meet. As
both
lucrative and low-paid
workk
activity directed toward making or doing something
work
have
Suggestion
has
to
work
to meet basic living requirements or even be affordable to
purchase
what they planned to have.
For
instance
, a recent
research
showed that 80
percent
of family divorced due to their difficult financial situations, leading to poor
life
quality
and unhappy.
Therefore
,
work
plays an important
role
in
one
’s
life
.
On the other
hand
, there are more desirable goals rather than a successful
life
to attain in our
life
. A vast
majority
of people perceive a meaningful
life
as having their families and close friends. The plain
truth
is that relationships with our family and friends are actually
keep
Suggestion
keeping
us going and happy even we are
failed
Suggestion
failing
or
stucked
caught or fixed
stuck
in
job
Suggestion
a job
.
Moreover
,
health
is another worth-mentioning
factor
. In
fact
, if people have a good
health
or
best immune
Suggestion
the best immune system
system
, their
life
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
time
is likely to be filled with human well-being.
By
contrast
, a successful
person
with a
cancer
or a fatal
disease
might have the negative
outlook
in their lives as they have no
time
. As aforementioned explanations, while it is true that
success
makes
life
more wonderful, truly important
thingsin
Suggestion
things in
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
as
health
and relationships are actually vital which
success
cannot bring about.
Work
is believed to be
one
of the most significant things among other aspects of human
life
, leading to wrong
perception
that
life
becomes meaningless if
success
could not be obtained. From my own
perspective
, I just
advocate
some extents of the given
statement
.
To begin
with, there is a wide
range
of reasons that
work
is important for
one
’s
life
.
First
,
success
in
work
brings about the
sense
of
achievement
accomplishment
. The plain
truth
is that people usually feel more happy and satisfied if they are recognised and
this
can be gained only when they are working.
In
addition
,
work
is crucial since it helps people to make ends meet. As
both
lucrative and low-paid
work
have
Suggestion
has
to
workk
activity directed toward making or doing something
work
to meet basic living requirements or even be affordable to
purchase
what they planned to have.
For
instance
, a recent
research
showed that 80
percent
of family divorced due to their difficult financial situations, leading to poor
life
quality
and unhappy.
Therefore
,
work
plays an important
role
in
one
’s
life
.
On the other
hand
, there are more desirable goals rather than a successful
life
to attain in our
life
. A vast
majority
of people perceive a meaningful
life
as having their families and close friends. The plain
truth
is that relationships with our family and friends are actually
keep
Suggestion
keeping
us going and happy even we are
failed
Suggestion
failing
or
stucked
caught or fixed
stuck
in
job
Suggestion
a job
.
Moreover
,
health
is another worth-mentioning
factor
. In
fact
, if people have a good
health
or
best immune
Suggestion
the best immune system
system
, their
life
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
time
is likely to be filled with human well-being.
By
contrast
, a successful
person
with a
cancer
or a fatal
disease
might have the negative
outlook
in their lives as they have no
time
. As aforementioned explanations, while it is true that
success
makes
life
more wonderful, truly important
thingsin
Suggestion
things in
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
as
health
and relationships are actually vital which
success
cannot bring about.
Work
is believed to be
one
of the most significant things among other aspects of human
life
, leading to wrong
perception
that
life
becomes meaningless if
success
could not be obtained. From my own
perspective
, I just
advocate
some extents of the given
statement
.
To begin
with, there is a wide
range
of reasons that
work
is important for
one
’s
life
.
First
,
success
in
work
brings about the
sense
of
achievement
accomplishment
. The plain
truth
is that people usually feel more happy and satisfied if they are recognised and
this
can be gained only when they are working.
In
addition
,
work
is crucial since it helps people to make ends meet. As
both
lucrative and low-paid
work
have
Suggestion
has
to
work
to meet basic living requirements or even be affordable to
purchase
what they planned to have.
For
instance
, a recent
research
showed that 80
percent
of family divorced due to their difficult financial situations, leading to poor
life
quality
and unhappy.
Therefore
,
workk
activity directed toward making or doing something
work
plays an important
role
in
one
’s
life
.
On the other
hand
, there are more desirable goals rather than a successful
life
to attain in our
life
. A vast
majority
of people perceive a meaningful
life
as having their families and close friends. The plain
truth
is that relationships with our family and friends are actually
keep
Suggestion
keeping
us going and happy even we are
failed
Suggestion
failing
or
stucked
caught or fixed
stuck
in
job
Suggestion
a job
.
Moreover
,
health
is another worth-mentioning
factor
. In
fact
, if people have a good
health
or
best immune
Suggestion
the best immune system
system
, their
life
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
time
is likely to be filled with human well-being.
By
contrast
, a successful
person
with a
cancer
or a fatal
disease
might have the negative
outlook
in their lives as they have no
time
. As aforementioned explanations, while it is true that
success
makes
life
more wonderful, truly important
thingsin
Suggestion
things in
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
as
health
and relationships are actually vital which
success
cannot bring about.
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