Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that some developed countries often offer financial support to countries in poverty.

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I agree that money cannot solve all the problems and other means of help should be considered, I believe funds are equally important. On the one hand, there are a lot of issues that cannot be tackled by money. In most of the underdeveloped countries, it is education, technology as well as the market that

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development. For example, some African’s are suffering from lethal diseases,

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as the Ebola virus, which is still not possible to cure. Under

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encourage their advanced medical group and professionals to invest more in research for vaccines.

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, if these countries only assist with the financial approach, the poorer countries have to spend a much longer time seeking a treatment, which may result in a large number of deaths, and

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deepen poverty.

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, in most cases, there is no doubt that financial aid is the most direct and popular solution. In other words, every individual could donate to an official charity or private

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help poor people in other countries. These funds are

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accumulated into sufficient support for the lives of thousands of families. Compared to volunteering, people are in

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money to buy what they want, for instance, water and food, which are sometimes neglected by those who do not clearly understand the situation. In conclusion, the governments of the

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s should make every effort to help those underdeveloped ones out of humanitarianism, whether through funding or other resources